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 Post subject: NA -V- ROTW Rnd 2 - Draztec -Vs- Powder
PostPosted: 01/26/04 02:46:45 AM 
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Rules the same as before.. First to 5 votes etc.. If your wonderin what
the fucks goin on then check this thread http://www.hiphop-elements.com/phpBB/vi ... hp?t=51236
to see why things have turned out like this... Lets try an set this rnd off
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back for more eh? do da world a favor and put a strap to your head/
pull da trigga, cuz u bout to be in mo shit than a crackhead slappin a fed/
i relapsed to how my battle raps collapsed so now I'm back from dead?/
resurrected only to show how your headed to gettin disrepected/
my lyricism serves as a relic ill enough to leave da medics infected/
your chances of winning are ugly your chances of survival is even uglier/
than a cock eyed dike bitch shootin up steroids tryin to get muscular/
don't think in da last battle we were "neck" and "neck" cuz i was diggin in yo jugular/
its my turn to murk you son who's gonna vote for your sloppy raps again?/
after i shit on u so much your left lookin like a porter potty accident/
who wanna see me tear his flesh into a mess like a shotty's blastin him?/
i swing blows at these Canadian Kinkos tryin to copy da same way we bring flows/
u can snort "Powder" in your clean nose and blow out some steam like steam boats/
u still fail to intimidate me with your inner hate/
i'll incinerate your soul and eat your heart on a dinner plate/
what bitch? u think cuz we North Americans that shits cool right?/
fuck that! i'll make u tuck your tail like Chihuahua's in Pitbull fights/
i'm gonna pretend this apprentice is serving a life sentence/
and i'll be that inmate with killing intentions quick to send this/
half ass spittin joke into homicidal dead ends an assasination so tremondous/
the most stupendous criminal investigators couldn't trace me with forensics/
its sensless to try to defeat da American elite knowing yall run from conflicts/
all of Canada would shit themselves if they got invaded by Saddams clique/
so what da fuck do u think is gonna happen when your confrontation phobia grows chronic/
and u meet this threat worst than terrorists helping Arabians plan schemes/
how u gonna go up aganist punchlines that hit so hard you'll witness titanium cracking?/
u don't wanna scuffle with this scarred knuckles cat into cranium bashing/
i already kicked this bitch in his pussy who else wants a shot at this Canadian drag queen?/

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Checking in, I'll get something up when I've got time, nice verse Draztec

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This battle’s like being BEATEN UP ON A TRAMPOLINE, because I’m JUMPING THIS DUDE/
Call me the quaker man cuz I’m lumping fools, Like a kid with NICE FREE-THROW, no one will be BUMPING YOU//
After round one you’re ready to lose again? You must have the MEMORY OF A GOLDFISH which is why you’re DOWN THE TUBES/
Faggot is full of hot air, plus you BLOW MORE PUBES THAN HAIR DRYERS AT TOWEL-LESS SORORITY HOUSES full of gay nudes//
If you were working slave labour to STOMP MY VEGETABLE JUICE, you still COULDN’T BE ON THE BEET/
Shit, even if you were a THEME-SONG FOR A COWBOY SHOW, you STILL couldn’t RIDE THE BEAT//
You’ll drop the mic after my lyrical gunshots heat it up, just like an uzi/
Draztec fucks wit transvestite floozies, you’re as REEL as a SLIDE-SHOW MOVIE//
It’s embarrassing how your behaviour is self-cock blocking, like you’re naked in front of a room, dick covered by your hand/
Draztec’s got a WORSE CASE OF COMING OUT THE CLOSET THAN THE BOOGIE-MAN//
I don’t care what size you use to write your lines, your PRINT still won’t be FINE/
Attack your nose with chop-sticks and use them as lock-picks to FREE YOUR MIND//
This battles only DOWN TO THE WIRE because it’s what your head been cut off with, staining you carpet red/
Hurl your head back at you through your lower abdomen and out your anus, now you’re a SHIT-HEAD//
Attack your whole nation with decapitation, SQUEEZE YOUR BRAINS FOR HYDRATION to represent Canada in the last round/
Like EROSION you’re LOSING GROUND, stab you with a needle and like a broken record all that comes out is a SCREECHING SOUND//
Your praise is a flash in the pan, which is the last thing you’ll see before you’re knocked the fuck out/
You can’t amount, like a toothless count your threats are EMPTIER THAN MC HAMMER’S BANK ACCOUNT//
Like Janet at the superbowl you’ve exposed yourself for using a thesauras in the first round/
Like it’s December 31 and you’re 2003, this is the END OF YOUR DAYS, and now you're DUCKING STRAYS like JAILBREAK AT THE POUND//

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Powder got this for better content. Though he did overdo the punchlines and some of them fell flat rather than hitting home but generally his was a more interesting read and you could tell his disses had more thought put into them. Draztec rhymed well in places but his content was weak and didn't really hit hard at all, it seemed quite simple and some of it made me laugh at how stupid it was. For example:

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your chances of winning are ugly your chances of survival is even uglier/

^That was a beautifully constructed line Draztec.
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u can snort "Powder" in your clean nose and blow out some steam like steam boats/

^What?

Vote - Powder.


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yeah he did overdo the punclines nice drop though


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There was some nice lines in both verses but there were a few dodgy
ones an all.. I thought this was quite close and couldnt choose much
between em.. Draztec's verse flowed better but Powders hit a bit harder..
I'll go with Draztec on this one just cos I preffered it slightly.. :beer:

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Although Powder over-expressed his punchlines at least some of them were nice.. I didn't feel Draztecs verse much, It was basic in flow.. And Powder had a couple of nice lines, which is enough to take this battle, Some of his concepts were simple and he could have adapted them far better..

"..Draztec fucks wit transvestite floozies, you’re as REEL as a SLIDE-SHOW MOVIE// .."

This is a pretty good line flow wise, But still kinda basic, but then again he wasn't facing much..

V - Powder.

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This was a real tough one to decide on...Draztec had some nice lines but lost me in a couple spots...Powder had some nice lines but most of them seemed too forced...Draztec wasn't as original as Powder tho...so Powder edges out another vote.

Vote: Powder

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This was a real tough one to decide on...Draztec had some nice lines but lost me in a couple spots...Powder had some nice lines but most of them seemed too forced...Draztec wasn't as original as Powder tho...so Powder edges out another vote.

Vote: Powder


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A battle of boring flow verses forced punches. Draztec gets it for not straining himself and coming off unnatural like Powder.

Draztec Rnd 1

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A battle of boring flow verses forced punches. Draztec gets it for not straining himself and coming off unnatural like Powder.

Draztec Rnd 1


Explain how my punches were forced, that's cool if you liked his verse, I'm not bitchin about losing the vote, but how the hell was it forced?

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Do you make it a habit of questioning a vote? :roll: I am not the only one who made a comment on your punches, but if you want me to break it down then I will.

Your punches were forced because you came up with outlandish scenarios that had to be explained to set up the punch. Just like in a real-life fight punches should be quick and almost unexpected; if you telegraph a punch then your opponent sees it a mile a way and ducks from it. All your punches were telegraphed with the over-elaborate set-ups, so they didn't hit hard. You should also strive to make your verse come off as natural sounding, yours sounds unnatural and stilted, you probably don't speak that way in everyday life. Just my humble opinion, feel free to disagree. :shrug:

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2-4 Powder

still uppin for votes i guess


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On punches i'd go wit powder, they were a little forced but still good, Draz ha some good wordplay, had for me to vote, verses were more or less equal.......

V=Draztec

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I think Powder creamed this dude. the punches were original and clever. Vote Powder


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some say creamed some say close could it be hate i don't know?

3-5 Powder still uppin for votes or if this is a 5 vote limit battle than i guess u got me Powder nice battle kid


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http://www.hiphop-elements.com/phpBB/vi ... hp?t=49686

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Yeah...Powder won...It's up to 5 votes

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Another thing I forgot to add in the rules was.. First to 5 votes in the
battles..


As you can see at the last post in the link I gave


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damn, powder dismissed that ass with ease....
Who want it with FrontLine.....huh????????????

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 Post subject: Re: NA -V- ROTW Rnd 2 - Draztec -Vs- Powder
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Also, just to bug you...

English Bloke wrote:
Rules the same as before.. First to 5 votes etc.. If your wonderin what
the fucks goin on then check this thread http://www.hiphop-elements.com/phpBB/vi ... hp?t=51236
to see why things have turned out like this... Lets try an set this rnd off
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