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Same rules as before .. we'll just up the votes to first to 7...
Lets see who's gonna stand victorious... Good luck fella's ... :)

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Future world champ signing in :)) good luck Marblez

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Chiggy check. Good luck Adept. Pleasure battling you.

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Hurry up motherfuckers

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Before he can even start steppin I'll have Marbz stressin to the point where his heart's sweatin
Weak flows is all the British tard's reppin so who's gonna win? that's not a hard question
Shaun is a fairy, just Anom with a dictionary, his palms are so hairy they get caught on the cum crusted on his keyboard
Elements is a haven for him to wack off when he's bored cuz men's attention is all he fiends for
Probly could find this fag on the sea shore screaming please Lord I need more free porn!
But Lost Marblez thinks he's a superhero; dressing in tights to fight on this web site
I'd lynch this fat fuck with a lead pipe and wouldn't hesitate to stop like cops running through red lights
Even if I had to perform with a dead mic I'd still be able to leave more heads hyped than this depraving prick
I remember his avatar used to be a degrading pic showing how he needs to be introduced to a shaving kit, me and slurred cussed him till he changed that shit
And his scripts are waste, they belong in a landfill, he has to do audio collabos with StandStill so he can get Fu to claim the man's skilled
But after my match last round this forum was tranquil, I should have both of your fans killed just to make this a better place
Then I'll slide my dick up in your mom after I get her baked and torture her with a chainsaw like I'm Leatherface
Pitting my wits against this bitch is degrading cuz I know he'll be looking at my lyrics while he's masturbating
I'm not hating, Shaun is more of a poet than an emcee, comparing our verses shows it's impossible for him to beat me
This battle should be live on TV cuz then everyone could actually SEE me use personals like this a biography and make it look so easy
I bet this fat ass couldn't do consecutive sit-ups, have him gasping for air like he having consecutive hiccups
Not in any better shape in this tourny gettin ripped up thinkin he's a 'vet' cuz he 'click tough' on the net
I don't gotta even put my best in to hear everyone say they reckon that Adept wins
When I'm on the mic it's a blessin while LM's accent would get him bitch slapped in one of my sessions
All his marbles will be lost when he comes to realize that he just read over his demise, he'll need to be institutionalized
Actually I wouldn't be surprised if he already tried to commit suicide but didn't die cuz he's too much of a bitch to take anyone's life

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Look at this welter's best. Fuck rhymes, I'll pummel your lungs into double pump to swell your head/
Trying to diss with personals that fall flat because you're saying what everyone else has said!/
Come original you pitiful bitch. Herbed nerd served in tournies because of his overused curse words/
Your rhymes nourished like Third World menus. Man, you aint even a bitch without Slurred Verbs/
Remember how you sucked his dick because your rusty diss style required help?/
Diatribe scribe scripted because bitchness dwelled so left thought streams dry like felt/
Marblez is hazardous. Packing shanks in spit and with hammered fists I'll have you in bandages/
Dumb cunt I punched your mum's stomach when fucking her pregnant. You were born with a black eye and fractured ribs/
Adept never questions reaming from muscular men and sucks them with tense lips until he sees cum/
Dragon tattoo flashes in avenues. Backslapped by this Freeman. You'd be lucky to be birthed by my semen!/
You cry in hands when your hymen slathering demands gets met with your mother's wet sliming vagina batter/
I'm the one devine in crafting damage more refined than your monosyllabic rhyming pattern/
"Tights", "Fight", "Site" "Light"? You speak and spell bitch. I'll see you in Hell's pit/
Left with your swells split. Have Satan jealous saying "I ask God and even he felt it!"/
PM'ing me with "Hurry up and post it...shiiiiit". The only time things bloom between your lips is when you give your Legolas posters licks/
Tornie? Who hosted it? Best crown me now. So Adept were you glad you wanted a quick roasting, bitch?/

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Fire, Gentlemen..

I think that's the best I've ever seen Adept come, he's improved greatly since the previous round.. I liked a whole load of his lines, His rhyme scheme was simple to follow, and although some of his lines threw me off slightly his flow was pretty much awesome.. He had some pretty hard hitting personals.. Despite all this I felt he tapered off towards the end of his rhyme.. I know it's a small thing but repetition of words just shows a slight lack of creativity..But I could overlook the slight pitfalls in his verse because the general vibe was ON! Seriously Adept you've impressed me with that..

Marblez, I saw your verse and just noticed it was shorter, It was a bit dissapointing, not the content.. But when you read a battle, a final in any tournament.. You expect to see the ammount of words matched to give both people a chance to display their skill equally.. That was a downer from you straight away.. Having said that.. I guess you're pretty busy seeing as how you've not been around much recently, and hardly drop any text any more.. SO I didn't equate the short nature of your verse to arrogance..

BUT, the content of your verse was also very hard, When I read Adept's verse I was eager to see how you'd respond.. And it was much of the same from his verse, but adapted to your style.. Some personals.. And answers to the questions he posed in his verse..

.. I didn't find it totally fair that you were allowed to seemingly feed of his verse, assuming this is just a won round thing? I haven't really been following the rules...It almost automatically means Marblez has the upper hand, dropping last. Well anyway, your fow..as always, was there in abundance....

Now, the hypothesis :

I'm torn exactly in half.. I want to say Adept for improving such a great deal, and I want to say Marblez for putting all that illness into a smaller verse..

I want to say Adept for his razor sharp personals, I want to say Marblez for his superior vocabulary.. Damn

Both had SICK imagery.. I don't want to say a draw.. I'll just assess them on a point basis, I guess..

Flow - Adept 7/10, Marblez 8/10
Punches - Adept 9/10, Marblez 8/10
Imagery - Adept 8/10, Marblez 8/10
Vocab - Adept 5/10, Marblez 9/10
Personals - 8/10, Marblez 6/10

TOTAL : Adept - 37/50, Marblez - 39/50

Vote - Marblez...

If this vote is dissallowed as bias.. Then at least I didn't waste the time going into reasons why I voted the way I did..

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Feeding was not allowed, idiot.

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^^ that comment was directed at Lost Marblez.

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i know that this is the final in a tournament and that you should give a really detailed vote but i honestly dont have the time at all i might later , all i can say is that this battle was straight fire and that it wasnt dissapointing for the final . even know marbles was good it was filled with good content and that made up for the length but im going with adept i really felt his verse and thought he was the winner { if you guys want more detail i'll give it later this is all i have the time to write .

vote --- adept

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Feeding was not allowed, idiot.


Ah, the minor feeding was only in relation to your style anyway.

But, fine, English Bloke can disqualify me.

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Ive been slack enforcing the rules laid down at the start of this tourny ..
If I'd been stricter it wouldnt have even got past the first round..and after
all this shits only for a bit of fun right ?
The only lines I can see of Marblez that I would even consider feedin are..
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"Tights", "Fight", "Site" "Light"? You speak and spell bitch. I'll see you in Hell's pit/

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Trying to diss with personals that fall flat because you're saying what everyone else has said!/

and thats pretty minor in my opinion...
So Adept.. Its down to you.. I dont want to see this tourny end in a
disqualification..and it would hardly be a victory for you if it did..But if you
feel that strongly about it you can have the "win".. Or you can wait and
see how the votes go...

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Well let's say this was a live battle, rules were you couldn't swear, and marblez swore, he would be disqualified, first round or in the finals, I realize this wasn't the case, but he still broke the rules.

The line which he tried to use the fact I used lots of personals against him was directly feeding off my verse, and the part where he mentioned slurred verbs was too, but refering to the words I used in my verse kinda crosses the line, especially since he couldn't even see the multies, web-site, lead-pipe, red-lights, dead-mic, heads-hyped, and tried to call it a monosyllabic rhyming pattern...I'd say a quarter off his verse was based on feeding off my verse, and his verse was only sixteen bars...maybe cuz I did pm him once saying yo post your verse already and then he posted it an hour later.

But if ya'll think it's wrong that I win by disqualification then let the votes come in.

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My turn to do my part...

Adept: NIce verse. Your multi's wre easy enough for me to find.. Yo came off on some hard shit, but then is spots there was also some soft hits. Not strong all the way through, but still a dope ass verse worthy of the finals. Also
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was really nice and this;
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Actually I wouldn't be surprised if he already tried to commit suicide but didn't die cuz he's too much of a bitch to take anyone's life
your finisher was dope too.. I just think that the line between those two wasnt stand out at all.. but ike i said dope verse..

Lost Marblez: This shit was raw.. Great flow all the way through.. and bloodly rhyme scheme that was aimed at the heart. Great multiple rhymes that actually said something.. I liked the fractured rib li line a lot. First read through I could tell the flow was there, but didnt really Take in all that was said. After reading your verse again its apparent that vocab was much stronger, anger was stronger, flow was a bit stronger..

Hmm..

I feel Adept did come stronger with personals and wordplay but LM came stronger with almost everything else.. real tough decision, and I cant be biased since neither of you really represent 50 states.. Really tough..but

Vote Lost Marblez.

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niiiiiice.

i felt as though adept came extremely hard maybe cos he went first and thus making it a llittle hard for marblez to match the verse...but not suprisingly the man whose marblez are all lost matched it and was better in some aspets than adepts....he didnt go for very obivious disses( and i felt as though adept did) making his verse more original...and for that reason i'm giving my vote to.

vote: lost marblez.

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:afro: I Thought Both Were Pretty Good But Da Marble Man Was Just A Little Better :afro:


:blahblah: Da Judge Has Spoken :blahblah:

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:angel: my vote is not biased...

both were on-point, both had great flow, both had sick punches....

vote=Adept

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cant be bothered with the crit...u 2 dont need them anywayz...

vote-lm

dope verses by both..props and respect due..peace


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"Dumb cunt I punched your mum's stomach when fucking her pregnant. You were born with a black eye and fractured ribs/ " LM

ha...i thought that was pretty funny....

you both came pretty nice...adept seemed kinda watered down, he was coming personal, but they were kinda weak...everything else was aiight, there were a few tight lines but it was among inconsistency...

marblez came hard attackin the whole way through...he took it mos def...

Round//Lost Marblez


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