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 Post subject: *Vet Tourney* J-INC vs victimizer
PostPosted: 07/23/05 08:19:24 PM 
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Read the rules thread then check in and get your battle started.

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victimizer is now in since that s.o.b. filthy is taking too long


please check in and drop your verses asap

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fuck waiting.........

words crack ya fuckin orbital bone
you's a fag that rub, sucks and gags just for quarters alone
your paragraphs guranteed to bring laughs over a beat
your battle essays drag worst than paraplegic feet
this thread's like a party.....you're the drunk bitch and i'm the jock
when people look they think: "oh yeah J's gon get that pussy"
punchlines? your wack shit couldn't push me you sick tard
and vicky, you're a DICKHEAD, so of course you gon SPIT HARD
i rip bars, like writing verses with fuckin scissors
and you're shitty scriptures come out more awkward than off guard pictures
tear out ya liver then deliver it wrapped to ya mother
then i kill her and send her ligiments back to ya brother
ending the show of this...victor/victoria sick with dysphoria dropped from a window six stories up
given swift gory cuts, right through ya vital nerves, for reciting the kind of words, thats right from the likes of herbs
your loss rightfully earned, look at you, know what i see???
a victimless victimizer, burned by his sadistic father, who now lives with the secret of where he received his herpes
scratch on bitch...........

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Alright I just checked elements today...And I'll keep my word, here it is...Lets go
oh shit!...If you read my verse already you gotta reread it cause I just looked at it and in comparison my 14 lines were too long so here it is the edited version...my bad

I'll maim this vet, till his blood stains a mess, on the ground with his last breath praying for death
Caved the face of this lame fuck, like jenny craig, J ain't-seeing-me till he gets his weight-up
I must've missed something, if you said mind-control ain't worthy...Then why the fuck is J-inc in this tourney?!!!!
Beat it! This is for vets, not heads who get no respect..his years-to-me is the only-time he seems-ahead
You should've canceled, stand with pom-poms next to me, cause you never had a chance-to-shine in this battle like S.O.B.!...(sun of brooklyn)
With cuts to the wrist, his hand is dealt, secretly his sig is a reminder to himself!
Once my wit hits these rappers, I get seven-years-bad-luck, cause I leave their image-shattered!
I spit a mix of words your shit for brains can't fathom, aim a fist at me?....This fucking weak can't even throw a tantrum!
I violate his health and pride, :angry: follow the sign, only action J will show me is his suicide
Left crying in feuds, I felt his rhyme should match his name, so I switched the I to U
Fuckers so stupid he can't comprehend he's weak, so I have to explain my last-line, pronounced your J...U...N...C! (junk)

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Victimizer
His verse had nice structure and also seemed kind of personal with "..fuck is J-inc in this tourney" and the sneek shot at S.O.B.
J-inc had that whole name calling and punchline thing that I usually don't feel but it came off pretty well and was very aggressive from the jump, but at times I felt he threw random punchlines around like that whole Jock at a party shit what was that? Although both were aggressive verses I vote Victimizer, for a more solid verse needing more anger management
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VOTE=Vict


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J-Inc was more direct in the dissing and more vicious with it, had better flow structure too.


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J-Inc, your flow and punches were good, very direct and hit pretty hard... so other just didn't work. ex. the scissors line...

Victimizer you had a few lines with potential but were lost in how they sort of came out forced ex the shattered image line. Although I think your concepts seemed more developed.

There was also some filler from both.

All in all, this is close for me, but I'm going to go with Victimizer on this round.


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Victimizer gets my vote....I think it flowed better when I read it..And made me laugh more.

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I lost a lot of Victimizer's flow and it was awkward to read but he hit hard with nice disses and some attempts at personals. J-Inc also hit hard but his filler was noticable as though he was just setting him up for his hard pnches. It was a very close one but I'm going to have to go with the majority...

Round - Victimizer


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victimizer had some nasty hits in his verse that were more personal and had better wordplay...also I thought his imagery and multies were much better..so my vote goes to vic and that makes it 5-1..


Winner: victimizer

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Haha Vic got that TKO style. Js wasn't bad tho.

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