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 Post subject: tomb stone feat. lil-bri and maddman
PostPosted: 11/06/08 03:18:38 PM 
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/50984778d7c91ea6/ ...i go first and do the hook...lil-bri is second and maddman is third...here's the lyrics to my verse and hook...all feedback is much appreciated!

yo i live in a pit, with a dying mind
buying time, as i wait for the light to shine
and its like im blind, cuz i struggle to see
how im gonna live life with this fucking disease
its been troubling me, but i stand strong
ask god, why im not free...what im trapped for
like i never succeed, so its better to leave
and my own fears wrecking my dreams
i chill and i take it slow, still i be praying yo
im a carcass filled with an ancient soul
i need a basic goal, gotta get me a plan
reach out and ill lend you a hand
everybody kinda left me and ran, but i hold no grudge
cuz im blessed by a god and his holy touch
so i build cuz i need to stay strong
and i will persevere till the demons are gone

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trapped in the past will i last its a tough decision
and im mad cuz i rap in this fucking prison
tryna pass as i grab all the love im given
and i act when i rap cuz my trust is hidden

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PostPosted: 11/07/08 12:55:16 AM 
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not bad fellas.nice vocs and the beat was on.only thing that bothered me was the that beat didnt change up that much on the hook, making it a lil boring.nice collab

8/10

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good to hear you more alive on the mic calibre!

this was really nice!

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W.i.G.P.u.s.H.a, 2tall...thanks a lot for the comments...glad yall feeling this

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PostPosted: 02/06/09 12:27:51 PM 
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song was dope
i liked the first and second verses the most, the chorus was not as enjoyable
but the song had alot of intensity
and sounded good from every artist
good job fellas

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PostPosted: 02/23/09 11:58:44 PM 
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yall did this nice

madd...you fuckin killed this

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PostPosted: 03/12/09 01:28:26 PM 
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yo I really like this track...cali I think you sent me this like half a year ago...sounds dope..does lil-bri post here?

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Adept Won wrote:
yo I really like this track...cali I think you sent me this like half a year ago...sounds dope..does lil-bri post here?


thanks for the comments everyone...i really appreciate it!...and i dont think lil-bri posts here...its a shame!

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well people, it's not like he doesn't know about the site, i put him on to it, but he isn't as internet savvy as we are i guess. he has potential to be a good artist, but he waste his time doin' shit like "stanky leg" remixes and shit. i mean he my nigga and all ............ but he is too commercial unless i come to him on some other shit.

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PostPosted: 04/02/09 10:38:03 PM 
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Dope...aside from the hook, which I really wasn't feeling (I think it was mainly the change-ups in the beat that I didn't like). There's that and the fact that Madd and Lil-Bri's vocals are way lower than Cali's for some reason.

Anyway, this is not exactly the type of track that I'd be knocking these days but it's cool for what it is.

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PostPosted: 05/01/09 04:54:52 AM 
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damn calibre sounds like dracula or some shit. gotta be the most original and appealing voice i've heard in a long time. notice i said appealing mothafuckaz so im not hating. anyways, 6.5/10 i'm a harsh critic don't worry about it.

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PostPosted: 05/19/09 11:13:28 PM 
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Calibre is the reason that I spit shit. You are my Vinny Paz, brother. Ever elusive, always close. Hit me up, I'll be your Jus. Peace man.


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