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Author:  Lost Marblez. [ 09/23/03 11:54:34 AM ]
Post subject:  Tear Syndrome by Lost Marblez

Sorry for the fucked up mic. I need a new one because mine is ancient. Just a quick track I dropped.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/poind ... zmusic.htm

Author:  Christopher Walking [ 09/23/03 12:25:49 PM ]
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I liked this.. Voice sounds raw, lots of emotion. Delivery is... shakey a bit, your flow sounds like it goes off sometimes, but.. it doesn't really, hard to explain what i hear. Lyrics are on point.... beat is nice, meshes well with your voice. Good drop.

Author:  Minitcha [ 09/23/03 01:15:37 PM ]
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Gorgeous beat dude. What was it? This track was superb! I really liked it. Your delivery was crystal clear and full of emotion. The lyrics were well sharp, really cool. The first verse you reminded me of a slightly slower Vinnie Paz/Necro. I also really like the way you switch everything up - so far everything you've dropped has been different, in terms of style.
I enjoyed checkin this... very nice stuff.

Peace.

Author:  Lost Marblez. [ 09/23/03 01:26:52 PM ]
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It was a Non Phixion beat.

Author:  Minitcha [ 09/23/03 01:31:12 PM ]
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Really?!? Not off TFisN?

Author:  Lost Marblez. [ 09/23/03 01:37:31 PM ]
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Minitcha wrote:
Really?!? Not off TFisN?


Nope.

Author:  Young Joshua [ 09/23/03 03:16:21 PM ]
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I dont think your mic is bad at all...


nice track, your voice is fuckin raw, its fresh.

nice lyrics also.

brilliant


peace

Author:  Lost Marblez. [ 09/24/03 01:22:29 AM ]
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Thanks mate. Much appreciated.

Author:  FuStandStillFu [ 09/24/03 08:24:28 AM ]
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Yeeeeeeah..

You went perfect with the beat as far as style goes - I actually didn't feel the beat - Lyrics were fucking great as was flow, But your delivery did vary... You seemed gruff in points then used your normal voice in other places - It may have been intended, but, it sounded a little weird... Should've been longer because it was dope.

You missed a couple of beats but that's circumstantial when delivery is that nice...

Good one homefillet.

Author:  Lost Marblez. [ 09/24/03 08:30:25 AM ]
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The change in voice style was intended but I feel it did sound a little awkward in places. I'll have to sort out what sounds good and what doesn't when I do me next audio.

Was going to make the second verse a lot longer but...well...didn't.

Cheers Fu.

Author:  Paradigm [ 09/24/03 12:17:21 PM ]
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Gawd, this was really good, you have an excellent presence man..

Author:  Joose [ 09/25/03 07:42:45 PM ]
Post subject:  damn

damn marblez, you someone remind me of a younger vinnie paz. Dope beat dope lyrics dope delivery. It seemed sort of staticish at times tho, but no worries. Might be the dopest track ive heard yet on this sight.

Author:  nwadaba [ 09/26/03 04:20:17 PM ]
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whoa... :o u are a ninja!

good delivery...mic was bad quality but nothing horrible...lyrics were ill and on point for the most part..u kept ur presence well, style was sorta the same throughout but done good...

ill shit marblez...u came thru like a champ...

Author:  Joose [ 09/26/03 05:31:25 PM ]
Post subject:  wherve

where have you been aba? could u hook me up with one of your tracks.

Author:  English Bloke [ 10/01/03 08:07:52 AM ]
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That shit was fuckin wicked.. The rawness tapered off over the last few
lines an come across kind of soft takin the edge off the tracks sharpness..
But all up that was a top notch effort..

Author:  Buju_Brenton_Ranks [ 10/01/03 06:31:13 PM ]
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that was your best drop ivbe heard fo sho...really man i never liedk most of your shit no matter what i said in the threads but this was fucking hard. :evil:

Author:  Buju_Brenton_Ranks [ 10/01/03 06:31:56 PM ]
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its still hard to picture you spitting in that monster hat lol....goest to show you looks mean nothing

Author:  God Of Emperors [ 10/03/03 04:26:19 PM ]
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Good beat the lyrics were also of a good standard but in the delivery you tried to come to hard in my opinion and the track would have been a lot better had you used a more calm tone of voice

Author:  -Chainz- One [ 10/16/03 11:20:01 PM ]
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one word - RAW... dope voice and flow over chill beats. First verse was raw and gruff, and then in the second you voice tapered down and was compensated by awesome delivery and flow. Nice stuff.

Author:  heretic [ 10/28/03 04:15:47 PM ]
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nice drop marblez....first time i ever was able to hear audios was today (i needed the mp3 instead of hi-fi), and this is coo. it's hella coo to hear how u guys spit and sound. u got that gravediggaz sound going...i like it. do u make your own beats?

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