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PostPosted: 02/20/10 04:03:00 PM 
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"I feel like love will never be achieved because everytime i get close, hate comes and takes it all away"



I guess i was so gone
When i thought you would have more brains and brawn
You made me weak, now i question if i'm strong enuff to continue on
Recieting my sad songs
I wish i wouldnt have to write things i knew all along
Every part of my day is the same theres no sun just dawn
When i see old pics i wanna erase your face and be re drawn
Why baby did you turn away from bein a lady to sum one crazy and shady?
You were so innocent sumthin like a soft and gentle swan
Laying in my pressence as if to never be withdrawn
I had major plans for a chance to have that one dance
Then you took my demands and strayed from first glance
Now i cover my face with shaken hands
Its so hard to scan this land without you damn
Thinking i was to be the man
Feeling like i wasted a whole life span
Memories last forever but fuck you and your whole clan
You ripped away a dream i once had
I was addicted now i'm "breaking bad"
I'm gunna walk away and never come back
Walk up that track and burn a new path with some one who will accept what i lack

i hope you glad

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PostPosted: 02/20/10 08:52:35 PM 
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emotional and determined piece man. good consistency.

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PostPosted: 02/21/10 05:13:31 PM 
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poetic and felt, very nice. a good emotional spill.

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