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this is a inquisition like a spanish intermision/
my intuition like my nana in the fuckin kitchen/
I keep my condom on my dope dick got em noddin/
im in the free clinic houston we got a problem/
who wanna get there cock castrated/
ninja style in japan im the last asian/
im gettin high but im past blazin/
now I got a coke habit and I choke rabbits wit a condom on like I last stated/
my penis is an individual/
and if your mouth is a criminal/
I might just be into you/
I spread labia like a gymnasium/
catchim me in the atrium/
we could play ball your butt be the stadium/
hocus pocus master/ like a roaming goat im faster/
im smokin coke wit laughter/ lost 50 pounds......before and after

just a quick sumthin for all you muffins

Some parts of this verse was very... well lets just say no. You're talking about cocks to much, just stop with that all together. two, you threw in a little filler in there which makes the verse sound bad severely. The flow was alright though, just work on your lyrics and you should be fine.

you got flow, now just focuss on better topics

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is that your.... "other" name?

dras round two is half done in our original thread, please finish it.

done