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 Post subject: the inquisition
PostPosted: 04/02/10 12:22:34 PM 
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this is a inquisition like a spanish intermision/
my intuition like my nana in the fuckin kitchen/
I keep my condom on my dope dick got em noddin/
im in the free clinic houston we got a problem/
who wanna get there cock castrated/
ninja style in japan im the last asian/
im gettin high but im past blazin/
now I got a coke habit and I choke rabbits wit a condom on like I last stated/
my penis is an individual/
and if your mouth is a criminal/
I might just be into you/
I spread labia like a gymnasium/
catchim me in the atrium/
we could play ball your butt be the stadium/
hocus pocus master/ like a roaming goat im faster/
im smokin coke wit laughter/ lost 50 pounds......before and after

just a quick sumthin for all you muffins :hi:

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PostPosted: 04/03/10 09:48:27 AM 
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Some parts of this verse was very... well lets just say no. You're talking about cocks to much, just stop with that all together. two, you threw in a little filler in there which makes the verse sound bad severely. The flow was alright though, just work on your lyrics and you should be fine.

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PostPosted: 04/04/10 06:50:35 PM 
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you got flow, now just focuss on better topics

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PostPosted: 04/11/10 08:48:20 AM 
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is that your.... "other" name?

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Drastic Tactics wrote:
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is that your.... "other" name?

dras round two is half done in our original thread, please finish it.

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Mourningstarr wrote:
Drastic Tactics wrote:
http://hiphop-elements.com/bb/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=25374


is that your.... "other" name?

dras round two is half done in our original thread, please finish it.


done

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