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 Post subject: In Pill Form
PostPosted: 04/02/10 07:59:13 PM 
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i be mad like the mad trapper
when my rhyme matter splatter on the floor boards
through an abyss where snakes hiss
lava dripps from a overhead cloud
the love make me proud, high power showers down
tears at my shroud garmet, makes me wanna vomit
drop a bomb and jump on it
fake left pump right
hump a dike, get hype
take a hike to a higher hieght
explore my sight
kiss you goodnight like the mafia might
cold hearted on the mic
if ya know the likes of me im the type of emcee,
to prolong a killing spree just alittle bit so i can machinegun spit
at a whole crowd with a voice so loud with no speakers
i'll hang those sneakers above your tombstone
your lyrics get beachcombed, armour get honeycombed
break in a house when nobody home
take my blood and write a bloody poem on the wall
than take it down the alley like a bowling ball
calling all druids to the epicenter
that change form like a genderbender
never pretend to pull through to the end
or i'll keep tabs on ya like a bartender
the taste of thunder holds old cats under oath
out of fear an shock, can't knock this rock
the pot grows longer like the nose to the face
wait patiently an i'll let ya taste my victory
smoke it like hickory wood
the potent vine component to my opponents last moments
drips down the chest, drink a cup, drink it up
an if ya must know the snowblinded will wonder off a cliff
when they take a whiff of the battery acid i run on
combust fumes, bust a nut, pass a slut to the next man
i dont want crabs from sloppy seconds
i kill crabs with deadly weapons
pack knives and nine lives, not even the best guys survives
surprise attacks like a fuckin axe or your income tax
out the dark jungle of lies of murderous eyes
stressful even for the vet who will kill
play king of the hill with the next challenger
must be hexed carve an X on your lex
as a death threat, clean out dirty chambers
squeeze anger, i hang and hold weight like a coathanger
my vest conceal my old banger
ima banker at the till i serve rappers
with, needles an daggers

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PostPosted: 04/04/10 06:49:32 PM 
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good flow think you coulda chopped it in half though

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 Post subject: Re: In Pill Form
PostPosted: 04/05/10 09:52:39 AM 
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I like your lyrics, i'm just not exactly used to your style. So it still looks horrible too me, Im sure I will grow into it though. keep working dude

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 Post subject: Re: In Pill Form
PostPosted: 04/06/10 02:33:49 AM 
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thanks. my style (undeveloped) i know isnt "street" oriented much, this kinda makes shit harder, plus im a visual learner and i just wanna get all the fucking details in there, yet that stifles my flow.

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Mourningstarr wrote:
thanks. my style (undeveloped) i know isnt "street" oriented much, this kinda makes shit harder, plus im a visual learner and i just wanna get all the fucking details in there, yet that stifles my flow.


Theres really nothing wrong with your style, Im just not use to it. You're a good writer, your verses get to the point. theres nothing wrong with that at all.

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PostPosted: 04/27/10 03:33:15 PM 
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some dark lyrics here, needs refinement but had to check who wrote it twice it impressed me with the unorthodox style that worked in some places nicely.

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