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PostPosted: 04/15/10 04:00:38 PM 
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The Intrumental>http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mnEc3ZzXRWs&feature=related

I hold your right hand, you know you've touched my heart
spill the blood from a pheonix as i bond with art
tear worldly fiction apart but before i start a path
to mark these charts, i count my cards
and tie my shoes
throw my spirit in the air like my hand in school
for the long walk ahead we'll skip beats
and know it took struggle and pain
to regain love and life, we once played in the streets
ate sweets like there was no fuckin tomorrow
need not grow into sorrow but when the greeds in your bone marrow
it's hard..it appears that in my years i've been struck with an arrow
further years passed and i outlasted the devil
now i tip on the fence about things
so i've gotta decide or grow out some wings
like my hair under the trees that, cradle my soul
and stay scattered while i stand in a row
like if this excecution don't finish shit itself
then i might, manifest destiny
why i let the small things get the best o me
keeps me on my toes for myself lookin out this periscope
i see the wisedom and i learn to cope,
with the heresy of hope yet apparently i wrote
notes to myself in the past life, sent them as a beacon,
cus in us all we know how to speak in one common tounge
and love the sun god..
i could just die and stand aside to applaude
the creature we've become, collectively as one
no matter our condition the mission is forever like our birth mother,
feelings for the rapist on the front cover
tossing in his sleep cus he's noneother, than himself
still an infant,
feelings for the famous leeching for cold gems
new boats, monopoly
probably wishing they could drop the hollow energy
some things stay hard to see all through history
i know it feels sometimes like no ones listening
and the argueing blocks tremendous elevation
leave the patient behind become the doctor
i fiddle with the clockwork so i stay in check
and spill my guts on the internet through a altered silhouette...

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If i crumble under the pain then understand i tried to find my plane
but when your sad soul don't know how to explain you get lost in the game
don't feel ashamed, put your heart in the aim
we go from infants to the grave
refine the lessons we gave, to ourselves that we saved
from the past like a cast or a photo of that ass
atlast upon arrival of my home i dance alone and let it be known
to the atmosphere, that im still here
looking through the mirror
so it caused me to steer myself clear of the puppeteer
and his numbers
standing ear to ear i would hear the devil slumbers
as mortal as you
but even in your greatness you avoided him too

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if not comment atleast add on with the "spirit" in mind

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Kind of deep, nice drop, puts in sad place though...?


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Mourningstarr wrote:
if not comment atleast add on with the "spirit" in mind


Didn't know you wanted anyone to add on, and I am working on something so I just have been coming in lately and checking shit.

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its fine DT, and thanks for the looks.

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use lyricism to verbalize the vision
precision, my mission herbalize a religion
i situate on a hesitation make moves to control my passion
blinded by my spirit theres certain things that cant happen
i asked him, no response solong i dont need em
i know whats wrong he's what dont belong but u beleave in him
i releaved my mind, confinds i cant do time in
cause some just wern't ment to be caged men
revelations verse ten i wont pretend, means dick to me.
n i wont give thanks to no god for my victory
i spit spiritualy in my own terms
you hear it i wear it like my own words
carry my own burdins an deserve what i get
put no blame or fame to name that didnt help sweat


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