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 Post subject: Drastic And Conspiracy- Take A Walk In My Shoes
PostPosted: 04/18/10 02:33:35 PM 
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Take A Walk In My Shoes

.....STOP!.... take a second to listen
Stand in my shoes, look at my perspective and visions
Things may seem calm and cool, than it hits you
Life isn't easy being famous, it don't fit you
It takes hard work, and a lot of concentration


There is no way that you can stop the hating
You will also be a target to the newer emcee's
Shooting bullets thinking that you wont pull it...
Than you grip the trigger until the clip is empty
Although you cant uplift this envy
I send bullets through my words, compare to the shit hes sending
Im apprehending the child of hip-hop
I will teach her new things, until its first spit drops

( DT chorus)
Come on... take a walk in my shoes
Live my life and do as I do
Work at the same job, and the same dime too
Like I said, take a walk in my shoes



......GO... Take a min to catch the flow
Heel and toe pressed firmly in thy soul
as my saturn paturns glow and form a see through mold
I was told that the only glitter was to be gold
So i press a common goal against my loving role
Never less or anything mo'


Take this bread and shed the blood we soak
A lost ancient once spoke in a cut throat hope
But i shall never choke on the whrines of wine in lost times
I focuss mutliple lines in my mind
To cluster the shrines soaked up by biggits and there swine
Pressing on through the great divine of crime
Societies debt is nothin more than a waste of prime grime
Its a grind to smoke the joints of sublime

( CT chorus)
Come in, Take off your shoes
And live free like me
Work at the same level, and pace too
Like he said, talk a walk in his shoes


Its not how you see it, seems a little easier
You think you want it all, but really its just teasing ya
I believe in ya, you might be able to walk the same roads
You may have the same foes minus the ustual lame flows
The life of an emcee takes time and patience
When its time to face it, I recline my spaces
I deny the places that try and make this
the time for fake shit, Im dyin to take it
Start trying to rape it, and designing the greatest
All in time as I am trying to stay lit
Now just imagen, all that plus dealing with fans
Call it a poker game the way Im dealing the hands
Im feelin my plan, though it wont be easy to suceed
I walk these same roads, as Im taking people to the scenes
where the haters wanna run, trying to disguise themselves
They strap up with there make up and there guns
Now you need to watch your back, they wanna take the belt
But I am a demon of death that just escaped from hell

(DT Chorus)
Come on... take a walk in my shoes
Live my life exactly as I do
Work the same job, fuck the same dime too
Like I said... take a walk in my shoes

Can you take critisms in the purest of writtens
My voice may come across hot or cold so duke up your mittens
I'll leave ya smitten with your upper lip bitten
But i just want to inspire my wisdom with a fluent diction
So Heres my proposition for your ambitions
Your heart is the ignition and its slippen in too transition
Can handle the attack or its sickened condition?
Its in submission for a physican so lets hope it regains the proper position
So we can get on with the expedition and in addition get on with lifes intuition
But i feel like my sytem is skippin' a head of its natural pace
So i wanna slow down and face the questions we have in this place
Because we will never be able to retrace the space that we so easily erase
I want to have a common knowledge of grace
So we can all come together without a stuggle to chase
Forget about queens and kings lets all be that ace
Stand together in our shoes so peace can finally be embraced.........


( CT chorus)
Come in, Take off your shoes
And live free like me
Work at the same level, and pace too
Like he said, talk a walk in his shoes...


(DT Chorus)
Come on... take a walk in my shoes
Live my life exactly as I do
Work the same job, fuck the same dime too
Like I said... take a walk in my shoes...

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 Post subject: Re: Drastic And Conspiracy- Take A Walk In My Shoes
PostPosted: 04/19/10 01:11:16 PM 
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Damn, no responses yet? hrmmm.. COME ONE EVERYONE! WHAT DO YOU THINK?! :dj:

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PostPosted: 04/19/10 11:56:25 PM 
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cool concept carried out nicely. i think CT's last verse stood out most.

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PostPosted: 04/20/10 08:04:02 AM 
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I like this! The concept, the flow was on point, I felt it got better towards the middle and the end, but I i guess the 1st verse was just to ease you in to the subject. Me myself I like to just jump right in and give you the meat and potatoes right away fuck the appitizer LOL that's just me though! All in all this was a damn good drop all together, thanks for bringing something fresh to read, cause nowadays seems like alot of clones in here!

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PostPosted: 04/20/10 09:38:21 AM 
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seven30 wrote:
I like this! The concept, the flow was on point, I felt it got better towards the middle and the end, but I i guess the 1st verse was just to ease you in to the subject. Me myself I like to just jump right in and give you the meat and potatoes right away fuck the appitizer LOL that's just me though! All in all this was a damn good drop all together, thanks for bringing something fresh to read, cause nowadays seems like alot of clones in here!

ONE!


Yeah, I was in the mood to write something, and than asked Conspiracy if he wanted to do a collab. He obviously had to agree, I wrote the first verse and chorus, he figured out the concept and road with it. I had the idea of making two different chorus's because I don't see much people doing that. But also try to make them kind of say the same thing.

Mourningstarr, Thanks for peeping this, I appreciate all the crit!

Yo Conspiracy!, we should put together a group and do some more collabs! that would probably also be good advertisement for the site. Have like a crew section for Free Agents, Crew talk, have Crew Battles, You could probably set up ranks for how good your audio/text is. Like Heavyweight be a certain color, Middleweight be another so on and so forth. Would probably bring a little excitement and something to work for to keep them coming back.


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PostPosted: 04/20/10 04:17:05 PM 
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Not bad guys, keep it up.

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PostPosted: 04/22/10 01:23:06 PM 
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Thanks for the looks 7:30/illy nice to see ya
around again how you 2 been. Starr as always
thanx for peepin'

and Dras I will be a pretty busy guy till
around June so be patient and we'll get
something going aight. Thanx for the collabo


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PostPosted: 04/22/10 01:25:37 PM 
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Yeah, im saying like a HHE group. you know what I mean? every now and than throw something together.


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Drastic Tactics wrote:
Damn, no responses yet? hrmmm.. COME ONE EVERYONE! WHAT DO YOU THINK?! :dj:



...sorry it took me too long to look at this...i regret not checking this sooner...

...pretty nice...solid effort from the two of you...good.


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PostPosted: 05/15/10 05:10:18 AM 
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b.p. wrote:
Drastic Tactics wrote:
Damn, no responses yet? hrmmm.. COME ONE EVERYONE! WHAT DO YOU THINK?! :dj:



...sorry it took me too long to look at this...i regret not checking this sooner...

...pretty nice...solid effort from the two of you...good.


Thanks for peeping this b.p., Appreciate it. oh, good to see you're back to posting on HHE. You may want to stop, but you really cant!

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