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PostPosted: 04/29/10 03:44:51 PM 
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Something i've been working on, just randomly adding lines too it as they come to me. Enjoy!



This is what they all call the second condition
To executive's, wishing you can be the best, but their isn't
any effort envisioned, ..you have to be calm and collective
every song is perfected...vocally, if you focus in hopes to be
Creative, concentration is the key to success
if you need to address the freedom that you breathe between sets
Before you hit the booth ...to listen to, ..ANYTHING that is.. written truth
A different root, of evil can compromise the inflicted youth
You getting loot' with the crimes committed in lines, but didn't
Rhyme a minute, my authentic prime invented a sign within it.
Inside a clinic aisle, ...try to mimic the gimmick style
Perfected by the word of mouth every nerd hasn't heard about
The murder route and the death of you, what is left is expected to
neglect the view of ignorance, most of music's accepted through
It's majority populous, monotonous... off the top
It's the opposite, The thought of this moral form of subconsciousness
in... light of rapping, this shady business ..it might of happened
long ago, ...but on a whole, other level I write a track an'
Cause a ruckus', ..so I say fuck a pen I've been stuck up in
The PC form of life, I was born to record and write
Before the mic.... and stage was set, any day I would wage a bet
on flow alone.. hold my own, in this business I'm going home
to the dishes, plate wash... rinse myself of this foolishness
that you insist, on speaking in... to forget what the music is
but I remember, ... I keep in touch with the subtlety
I don't need you to cover me, from the envy and gluttony
I'm loving me, discovering other ways of the back stabbing
Cats had in dark times... so I see em' like marked signs
The cynic's ego... is fucking big like a limousine, no
other cat is platinum bound in a rap when the track is down
Ask around.. I don't trust any cat in this line of press
so I'm addressed, only by every line that I've rhymed in text
Why confess, it's like every guy's going try to test
ability, but really see through their logic facility
It's killing me to hear it now in my ear the generic style
is horrible to comprehend, any thought they've dropped within

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 Post subject: Re: Random
PostPosted: 04/29/10 04:12:17 PM 
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nice son... i read it through a few times i think u got somthing there just needs refining

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