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 Post subject: The return Of ANOMALY warm up
PostPosted: 06/02/10 09:05:33 PM 
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been ages since ive done any keystyles im all about the audio now...

Im the cat who used to terrorize the LBC//knockin weak faggots out like 1-2-3.//
Been gone for a while but now I'm back// like coke with soda Im hiphop's crack//
The flow that i'm sick with flow's like a liquid// Im so sick I'll get ILL if i don't spit//
I tear more rappers than children at christmas//Im sicker than the children with cancer at sick kids//
real bad man with real bad mannaz// real men talk with real man chatter//
Bar after bar every page and every chapter// no bull shit and no bull chatter//
Original badman real x factor// sound of the bass comin out your ghetto blaster//
Rip trax faster im the rhyme crafta// Im the track masta' gal wind ya back fat//
Now bump and grind to the gun shot// want to see you mutha fukkas drop//
haul like a tractor brawl like a raptor// stalk you catch ya// burn hack and slash ya//
Smash ya, trash ya, craft your disaster I'm the witch crafta//
It's a new era its a new chapter// if we ever battled guaranteed that I tapped ya//
old dirty bastard always plastered//cut you into pices and forget where i stashed ya//
More blood shed than the D day matter//only one punch to beat a weak rapper//
your better off to hit Ctrl Alt and delete that.

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 Post subject: Re: The return Of ANOMALY warm up
PostPosted: 06/04/10 05:28:46 AM 
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I can see you have a lot of warming up too do. There are a few things wrong with this verse. One, your flow was a bit choppy, every now and than the flow was just.... off. Two, I see you rhymed the same word twice, Chatter with chatter. Thats frowned upon when someone is reading the verse.

I'm going to drop something here, pretty much a welcome back verse


I have to say welcome back Anom, the board needs some activity
Greeting those with skill and a nice delivery
I know this is a warm up, not a cypher or collab
Just letting yall know that D.T will put the rifle to your dad
Once it excites you than you get mad, I see t your true colors
Always arguing and bickering, like you were two brothers


Nothing all that serious sounding, just a welcome back so... Welcome back!

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 Post subject: Re: The return Of ANOMALY warm up
PostPosted: 06/13/10 11:12:41 PM 
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it was just a quick freewritten you can expext those mistakes

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