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 Post subject: Skywriter vs Absolution (VOTING CLOSED)
PostPosted: 02/06/08 03:47:14 PM 
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MAn 16 bars
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break down votes,

I'll post 2morrow


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 Post subject: Re: Skywriter vs Absolution
PostPosted: 02/17/08 02:39:07 PM 
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This verse is fourteen lines, let the missing lines be in the memory of Absolution. I come with fourteen, and this fucker can't even come with a bar...HA!

Feel this...

despite a typin' drop, my flow is pipin' hot -
that ain't a pimple on your head, it's my sniper dot,
don't need to shoot you dead though, your style is dead slow,
I'm first bro, and I stop seconds like matrix tempo,
my flips are trainin' you with wicked fists,
block the sun with scripts, till I eclipse your consciousness,
how can you take so long to post? I'm cuttin you off like I'm the host,
don't mean to boast, but these sixteen bars will stomp your throat
"I'll post 2morrow?" fuck that, your whack, you can't rhyme
like ant inside clockwork, I guess you're lost in time...
it's been a week and some...you're weak and some,
clearly outdone, couldn't breath my air if you were a mountain
skywrite's the truth, why you're MIA? don't give come with a lame excuse,
you ain't Absolution, I am - cause you're absolved now that I've murdered you...


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 Post subject: Re: Skywriter vs Absolution
PostPosted: 02/17/08 03:56:34 PM 
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Skywriter you can go dah way of the typewriter/ obscelete/
You can never reach my lowest peak/ like jupiter's mountains I'm un scalable/
Even the hardest armor is impalable/ you mail-able send ya body back to ya hometown/
Found bound/ and gagged in the basement of a town home filled with ravenous hounds/
You think you profound/ I'll leave you a palp and flesh mound/ becuz of powerful blows/
My shits cold/ it freezes even ya molecular structure and breaks you down to ya outline like a stencil/
You just another experimental/ battle I use to sharpen my teeth, you can't compete I leave ya body imcomplete/
You in-complete disarray/ as I strike and scave ya body into fleshy decay/ you wanna know why I put this battle on delay?/
To give yo punk ass a chance to live/ I'll have the DA's piecin you together like an adlib/ you mad kid?/
Cuz I'm punishin you worse than ya step dad did/ you better be glad kid cuz without me you wouldn't have been around/
Ya moms puss was pretty tight when I was puttin it down/ but now since she been hoe'n like dah farm/ her pussy sag like my grandma underarm/
You under-par and I'm Tiger Woods my iron strong enough to lift you outta ya car/ The doors ajar cuz you left that shit open/
Now I'm scopin/ leavin ya brains smokin up against the wall/ Its kinda like a fast break how come thru and you lose dah ball/
You lose ya gall tryna fuck wit me/ I give throat shots worse then Absolut spiked with PCP/ Face it you aint a pedigree/
You just another wanna-be pitbull/ who tryna get cool by fuckin wit dah bull now you gettin dah missile outta dah tool/

Fuckin bitch. :angry: Don't ever call me out like that mufucka


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 Post subject: Re: Skywriter vs Absolution
PostPosted: 02/18/08 09:42:40 AM 
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I liked the "sniper dot" line and the flow in the opening two bars set things off nicely. However, your structure and form quickly began to slip afterwards. I also didn't like the fact that you said "these sixteen bars will stomp your throat" when you only posted 14. Absolution had a more consistant verse.

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PostPosted: 02/19/08 12:01:41 PM 
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yeah the snyper dot line was the most interesting thing imo,

however AB took this because it was more creative all round..

I think that Skywriter is going to come with a different approach next round (if there is one) because he sees what type of rhymes he's up against. Sky: pull out your creative ammo and dodge the ABAB stuff, because alot of guys on here eat through that, with clever wit and syllable schemes.

vote AB

ps.. however, if the first person to drop (who is the first to expose his flaws that the other person can feel out first..) It is obvious if it is short, than if you type more stuff, than you can throw in more punches.. (even though this isnt always the case, cause the first person to drop can always be better than the second depending on the battlers involved..) and eventually take the upper vote..

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Absol: this was your sickest stuff in my opinion:

"Even the hardest armor is impalable/ you mail-able send ya body back to ya hometown/
Found bound/ and gagged in the basement of a town home filled with ravenous hounds/"

simply just hard punches landed consecutively in perfect harmony

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absolution you know you my boy and all but.... i don't vote based on that..... So .......

i will have to say my vote lies borderline..... right down the center.... i think absolutions verse was a little more hardcore ... i would like to hear it spit in audio..i think it would sound interesting

skywriter got a little bit more mellow style..... but it seems like he took his time to put together a little more solid verse... both came nice in different aspects though ... so i vote tie!

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PostPosted: 02/21/08 05:39:13 PM 
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sky's best lines:

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block the sun with scripts, till I eclipse your consciousness,
how can you take so long to post? I'm cuttin you off like I'm the host,
don't mean to boast, but these sixteen bars will stomp your throat


Quote:
it's been a week and some...you're weak and some


ya verse sounded like u just bigged yaself up, rather than actually dissin ab


ab's best lines:

Quote:
Skywriter you can go dah way of the typewriter/ obscelete/
You can never reach my lowest peak/ like jupiter's mountains I'm un scalable/


Quote:
battle I use to sharpen my teeth, you can't compete I leave ya body imcomplete


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you wanna know why I put this battle on delay?/
To give yo punk ass a chance to live/ I'll have the DA's piecin you together like an adlib/


ya verse was hot...wasnt hta best punchlines but u can hear tha rawness in it...only advice i give you, is limit the gun references, most those are played and lack force

vote:ab

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4-1 Wow.. Thanks for the votes yall. This was on the spot as well TB. I hate to put gun references in it but I'ma cassidy fan so you know how that goes. Lol. Anyway keep um comin I appreciate every vote so far!


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honestly I thought skywriter had a few good lines and ab had a couple...sky had the better verse by a little bit to me....

vote sky

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4-2 Can we get this shit done and closed?


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 Post subject: Re: Skywriter vs Absolution
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I'm first bro, and I stop seconds like matrix tempo


best line but not a direct hit

still my vote is 4 SKYWRITER

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 Post subject: Re: Skywriter vs Absolution
PostPosted: 03/07/08 01:47:08 PM 
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absolution you know you my boy and all but.... i don't vote based on that..... So .......

i will have to say my vote lies borderline..... right down the center.... i think absolutions verse was a little more hardcore ... i would like to hear it spit in audio..i think it would sound interesting

skywriter got a little bit more mellow style..... but it seems like he took his time to put together a little more solid verse... both came nice in different aspects though ... so i vote tie!
nigga stop politicin!!!! :D


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MouthPeace wrote:
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I'm first bro, and I stop seconds like matrix tempo


best line but not a direct hit

still my vote is 4 SKYWRITER


Dat Was Nice...

V/Sky

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I have to give it up for skywriter, he had some real nice lines in that verse, and I have never seen anything from him before. Absolution had lots of good imagery but really wasn't as consistent as skywriter in my opinion.


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 Post subject: Re: Skywriter vs Absolution (VOTING CLOSED)
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5-4.

The vote is closed, so who's the winner. Or what?


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p.s. - WhiteMike I laughed my ass off when I read this:

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Sky: pull out your creative ammo and dodge the ABAB stuff


Man either you didn't read MY verse or you don't know what a rhyme scheme is. AABB son - not counting the internal rhymes.


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SKYWRITER wrote:
5-4.

The vote is closed, so who's the winner. Or what?




Adept Won wrote:
I have to give it up for skywriter, he had some real nice lines in that verse, and I have never seen anything from him before. Absolution had lots of good imagery but really wasn't as consistent as skywriter in my opinion.


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