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 Post subject: Savage vs KidWite
PostPosted: 08/11/08 10:29:55 PM 
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aiight, 20 lines minimum, 25 max. 5-0 is KO. drop within this week.
oyea remember your links, copy an paste the address of 2 other threads you commented in, incase ya didnt know (i dont even know what thats for).

Ill drop first. no feeding
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yo, yo check-

You Kidin' me Wite?!/
aint ya a little young ta get hung in the night?!/
in no position to win, I won't grab your face, but your chin/
then spin it around burn your bones in a mound/
my logics profound, you scuffel an pound,/
leaving scrapemarks on the ground/
when Im done faggot, you'll be less than a sound/
who the fuck is KidWite!!?/
showed up overnight then I see he's wantin a fight/
...well you've got it aiihgt/
Im immune to rust feed on you daily till you a hollow husk/
blotting your light, devouring all your body an the scraps of your might/
you just scouring son, my raps cast vast like Atilla the Hun/
or Ghengis Khan, KidWite couldnt even play Jenga wrong/
head on collision with pin point percision/
I'll wound you so bad, when you takin a shit you'll need suppervision/
you feble, easily persuaded by people/
its like 4 in the morning, how you get your bitch to stop moaning/
I tried makin a meal for her, then made a meal of her/
no luck so I ate out with others/
though I can't stop thinkin how much her pussy looks like your mothers/
spit in your face motherfucker cripple your thoughts/
split atoms inside you, spread your teeth out beside you/
Kid's nothin on the surface just worthless on mother earth/
nothins worse than a peasant thinkin they can't get shot like a pheasant/


...I gotta get the fuck back into battles again...

drop Kid

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 Post subject: Re: Savage vs KidWite
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Look at this whack trick, Savage,
Who happily has his ass ravaged,
By every gay guy in his class, asking,
Coming at me, but he just can’t hack it,
Like a bad habit, I’m a have to kick this freestyle, rabid,
You hopping around like a buck wild, rabbit,
Loving on the mic, like a crack addict,
You like this, lyrical spit, come and grab at it,
This shit’s been Mastered, You slow ass, bastard,
That shit you spit sounds like a verse I wrote, then scratched it,
Just like your mother, I wore out the surface, then trashed it,
Never underestimate the Devils Advocate,
I’m a syndicate, and you’re nothing but a simpleton,
Spitting about how tough you be acting, when you’re just quaking, like a duck crapping,
Yeah shit happens, and no, I have no clue where your rap went,
So quit hating on the new guy, before I drop this shy ply,
And turn you out, on the inside, in day light, in front of your whole family’s eyes,
Don’t act all fucking surprised, you better believe, there isn’t anyone as evil as I, Why?
Because I’ll stab, and kill this rhyme, in plain sight, and won’t even hide.
Hence this, squeamish, ridiculous, shit I spit. Talkin like you a menace?
More like squeaking, because you wanna go boot knocking, with Dennis,
Savage, your best friend is, a deflated blow-up hooker with chapped lips,
So be fully equipped, next time you fuck with this, no equivalent,
I’m the youngest, head of this, and you just a split, broke-back, Bitch!

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 Post subject: Re: Savage vs KidWite
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I think the topic drop is just to keep the voting going. Like, if ppl wanna battle, they gotta read, and vote two others. Keeps it all even.

What's a "5-0" Dun wanna sound like a newb ass. Just didn't click, is all. Either way. Good battle, Nice drop. Good luck!

WHERE DEM VOTES AT?

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KidWite wrote:
I think the topic drop is just to keep the voting going. Like, if ppl wanna battle, they gotta read, and vote two others. Keeps it all even.

What's a "5-0" Dun wanna sound like a newb ass. Just didn't click, is all. Either way. Good battle, Nice drop. Good luck!

WHERE DEM VOTES AT?
yea, don worry bout the links.

5-0 is when 5 people vote for you and opponent still has none, then the battle is over and thats a KO (knock Out)

good drop an good luck.

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 Post subject: Re: Savage vs KidWite
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um......tie.

Thas the way it has to be, from my perspective. Neither verse seemed like it took much thought at all....flow....but no thought process. Where are the lines that make me either think or laugh? I saw a lot of filler. Use current events n' whatnot. Humiliate one another. :|


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um......tie.

Thas the way it has to be, from my perspective. Neither verse seemed like it took much thought at all....flow....but no thought process. Where are the lines that make me either think or laugh? I saw a lot of filler. Use current events n' whatnot. Humiliate one another. :|

what can i say, fuck you. it really was 4 in the morning and my burntout self was not about to be pulling anything lethal outta my ass. I wrote it & i wrote it fast so i could go to bed.

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ahhh. "Fuck me". Can't say I didn't see that comin. People hate the truth. You admitted puttin up a half assed verse.....and then got mad at me for noticin. Kids these days. When yall say "crits please" yall really mean "please tell me how good my verse was". But if I woulda just said "tie", that wouldn't have been good enough. When I say "dope verse", and tell you why, its "oh, you give good critiques". When your verse is on the wack side and I tell you why its "fuck you". Wow. So mature. I remember when I used to get mad at people on this site for not feelin my shit. Grow up. How you expect to get better listening to yes men?


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 Post subject: Re: Savage vs KidWite
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Yeah. See, I'm a prick so I don't quite care if ppl don't like what I've got to offer, lol. Since this was a freestyle, there was no thought, I grabbed my tape recorder, read his verse, and the spit at it, then typed down what I spit. Then went to sleep, lol.

Thnx for the crit, maybe a RD 2 would square this one off. Up to you, Savage.

Peace ~ Kid Wite

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All jokes aside, though...I'd love to see a round two....for what my opinion's worth.
We need more battles. This used to be the most frequented part of the website.


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ahhh. "Fuck me". Can't say I didn't see that comin. People hate the truth. You admitted puttin up a half assed verse.....and then got mad at me for noticin. Kids these days. When yall say "crits please" yall really mean "please tell me how good my verse was". But if I woulda just said "tie", that wouldn't have been good enough. When I say "dope verse", and tell you why, its "oh, you give good critiques". When your verse is on the wack side and I tell you why its "fuck you". Wow. So mature. I remember when I used to get mad at people on this site for not feelin my shit. Grow up. How you expect to get better listening to yes men?
k...that was the kind of "fuck you" you might say to your friend or somthin in person. Not "fuck you, I hate you, your crit sucks".
the internets not good for some things..like how you use a word. I CAN take crit, and I have taken lots good and bad.

...maybe I just tell people "fuck you" too much. Cus when I say it, its usually not meant to be harsh unless its in a battle...but youll know when I mean it. I say "fuck you" to my friends ALL the time.

btw a tie was better than I expected for my weak verse.
KidWite, we will battle again, Rd.2. Ill make the thread when Im ready. Peace

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....understood, homey.


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....understood, homey.

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savage takes this rd aswell.

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To be completely honest I think Kid Wite took it. Both were straight forward and both had little wordplay or metaphors to work with. Even though both had a pretty good flow, Kid Wite stepped it up with vocab.

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To be completely honest I think Kid Wite took it. Both were straight forward and both had little wordplay or metaphors to work with. Even though both had a pretty good flow, Kid Wite stepped it up with vocab.

Vote Kid Wite

word.

...but round 2 is were its at! we actually kinda tried in that one, haha

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I may be bias, in all honesty, but I'm giving thsi round to Savage, I just feel his verse more.

Reason being Kid's verse bored me after awhile, It was decent, just dididn't hold my attention, vote = SavageSilencer.

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