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 Post subject: WhaTzisName vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 09/10/08 03:07:06 PM 
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this should be good....


round 1 -

Whatzisname ? really, what is this ?
you dare wanna spar sentence for sentence, with the lyrical decendant from the heavens
Mr. Mind bending, world blending, sure to leave your face dented
not to mention, take all of your votes away
from earlier battles, there's no defense against my wordplay
I'll have you begging mercy, from torturing you in all the worst ways
today, I hope its your birthday, it's the only way that you'll win
cause sympathy is a characteristic, that's embedded in men
but me, I'll sever your limbs, and it won't be a candle that you blow out, its my dick, the size of your shin
Mighty Tearz, Collapsing your chin, from all the punches that I hold to the end
but you have all right to defend, any type of props that you've garnished
I'll leave you feeling car sick from my words in the wind that flow to your carcass
Mighty Tearz, the iller marksmen, shooting words to your brain's fragile word making compartments
sizing up your coffin, to cough in, so the sickness crosses
all your vital organs, making them hurt like a 100 pound man jumping in a mosh pit
my win, you can chalk it, as a victory
whatever you thought you were, now your gonna wish you were me..........................................

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PostPosted: 09/10/08 09:39:48 PM 
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nice verse, but dis is a battle..not poetry class..listen:

when I sighted ya verbs I thought some1 save da life of dis herb,
ya punches could hit Greatness, but dey'd haveta start a fight with me 1st
dat horseshit u pen is da worst, my writting-hand's like lead when it works,
my best shots'll leave pieces yo head in ya shirt..all there is, is a dirt-bed 4 u jerk
so fled or get hurt...I’d tell u 2 drop dead ..but u already did dat in ya verse!
lightning with scriptin..my precise typing's like inciting collisions...
& u're ridin without a seatbelt, nowhere near the right fighting conditions,
I'll leave u with more black "I's" than a concisest at a civil rights convention
so far, ain't shit u've said amazing ..born in da flames, I was bred 4 blazin..
ILL? yo rhymes r not dear..but watch mine drop Tearz like a sad occasion....
u're anotha emotional herb actin poetic..ya rappin pathetic & play'd as fuck,
been 2 yo MySpace page ..u should save dat stuff, ya not a mage..U SUCK...
in actuality u're more of a hiphop-themed Suburban than Shaq's favorite truck!
ya lil wannabe Cage tracks fall basic, ya music's not raw dog, face it...
u're no threat at all cakeness..ironic: yo banana bars NEVER make crowds go ape shit,
c'mon dude, the only way I wouldn't see u, is standin gainst a beige wall, naked
see he's some Hespanic kid no melanin to show for it...
a good tan, u worst warrant, so light-skin'd..Fuck high-yellow: dude is low orange
look I am REAL HipHop..u justa fag with no flow, a beast-less queer...
dummy, it's a reason yo style of lyrics Underground..it's been deceased for years!
obsessively tryin 2 rip my target apart..I'm a demon maulin a mark..
so if you seen "Devils Advocate", u KNOW dis was justa jog in the park!!

...it's nuthin personal Tearz, it's just Hip-Hop Music in the form of combat. ~WhaTz!~

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PostPosted: 09/10/08 10:13:03 PM 
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"Demon maulin a mark"

Yeah, they fucked that dude up. Aye Whatz, you win it but:

Yall should watch your line length. I start to question whether or not these lines can be spit to a beat, for real.

Sick lines, but long, seemingly...a bit of a stretch, as far as rhythm goes.


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PostPosted: 09/11/08 08:23:35 AM 
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Whatz got this. Good shit from both but Whatz was a litte more fierce.

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PostPosted: 09/11/08 03:24:15 PM 
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Yall should watch your line length.


haha..yea I just start typin & completely forgot about line or verse structure.

but I alway do that when I'm freestylin/keystylin acapella, I'll work on it.

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PostPosted: 09/12/08 02:14:25 AM 
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At least there's still a sprinkling of talent left in this mofo. I gotta give this to Whatzhizname he had some clever lines that got my attention like that low orange ish. Tearz verse was good but IMO would fit in the Emcee Forum better. Next time Tearz be more direct, go for the throat and maybe you can get him.

Whatz rnd 1

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PostPosted: 09/12/08 03:38:34 AM 
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Tearz verse was good but IMO would fit in the Emcee Forum better. Next time Tearz be more direct, go for the throat and maybe you can get him.


word, i feel ya, but I think it was still a good verse to start things off, whatz just one upped me, i guess thats good enough on votes, seems i loss the first round...set up the second round whatz, its on you now to go first, good battle so far


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PostPosted: 09/12/08 02:59:24 PM 
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Tearz wrote:
word, set up the second round whatz, its on you now to go first, good battle so far


iiight, I'll do that when I get home.

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PostPosted: 09/12/08 05:08:56 PM 
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cool, got half my next verse written, just waiting to see what else you got to make sure I got everything covered


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PostPosted: 10/02/08 08:45:07 PM 
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Whatz got this all day, Tearz dropped forced rhymes and became a slave to his rhyme scheme, Whatz just tapped with some punches and personals that gave me a chuckle.


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PostPosted: 10/03/08 07:54:57 AM 
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vote for what - - more fire, more directed, nice lines like

"banana bars NEVER make crowds go ape shit,"

"but watch mine drop Tearz like a sad occasion...."


and the internal rhyming and cadence of

"lightning with scriptin..my precise typing's like inciting collisions...
& u're ridin without a seatbelt, nowhere near the right fighting conditions,"

was tight

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 Post subject: Re: WhaTzisName vs. Tearz
PostPosted: 10/06/08 05:37:47 PM 
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WhaTzisName Got this hands down,

The beginning of his verse came with some good punches and flow.

My favorite lines were

"lightning with scriptin..my precise typing's like inciting collisions...
& u're ridin without a seatbelt, nowhere near the right fighting conditions,"

"ILL? yo rhymes r not dear..but watch mine drop Tearz like a sad occasion"

and...

"look I am REAL HipHop..u justa fag with no flow, a beast-less queer...
dummy, it's a reason yo style of lyrics Underground..it's been deceased for years!"

Now Tearz..

You seemed more like you were telling more of a story.

My advice is dig up some history on the next person you battle, you know try to really dig deep and find out where it hurts the most. Try and focus on battling, and not writing a story..

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PostPosted: 10/07/08 11:01:49 AM 
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check out the second round of this battle, tell me what you think of that

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