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PostPosted: 02/25/02 05:12:00 PM 
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I am kinda new at this, but i am bout ready to get crackin so somebody holla!!


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so i guess the invitation was to gentle, all ya'll hard core rappers got alittle too much pride to battle a nobody and get melted like a crayon on a car seat, on a sunny day


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Swallow this...

Oblivious to the surroundings/ You sit at your desk pondering/ I enter your boundaries/ Hang you like laundry/ Feel like you been snagged by the feds/ And grabbed by the dreds/ Dragged to your bed/ And stabbed in the leg/ Blindfolded/ From the crimes I’ve molded/ Rhymes I’ve saudered so hot that you can’t even hold em/ On the back of my eyelids I see the checkered flag/ Rhymes melt the wax and make the record sag/ Such a fag/ Rape you with the antlers of a stag/ Leave you wiping your rectum with a blood-sopped rag/ Rip a slit from your ass to the back of your scrotum/ Watch you give birth to your intestines, frantically try to resort ‘em/ But I distort ‘em/ Contort ‘em/ Into knots sailors tie in boredom/ As your bladder and kidneys fall out like a stage 3 abortion/ I flip you and split you to the upper pectorals/ It’s straight immoral/ Out of desperation you start giving me oral/ Hope I’ll save you from the portal/ Where I send you with the rest of the mortals/ Where dead fish flow/ And corpses I kiss go/ The canvas goes black as I snap you like a wish bone.

Whatever reputation you had, was just thrown to the wolves.


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that shit was sick !!!!


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surely u ripped it/ but i'm too quick hit you back after that sick shit/ wit my 1's and 2's/ sorry ur stuck on start..nigga u lose/ u pushin the petal too hard i'm stuck on cruise/ slice'n and dice'n up your block like tomatoes/ not easy cause your insides is mushie like my "today ho's"/ pits musty.. cause when u wrote that verse u made your own-self sweat...what can be worse/ but even if you own lottery don't place a bet..know it hurts/ cause even though i'm not lirikly 'killin' you, my verses tactfully tremble you/ team protect'n you like thembels/ if you can't catch the flow it's cause i'm nimble.. and quick/ i feel you...you hate but bite my shit/ talk trash but on my dick/ my writin's have you up at night bic'ering with mom's/ i'm laughin as i write wit malt liquer in palm/ yeah i could have murdered you 102 times in one line but i chose to write verses that don't even sound like mine/ none can compare/ you scribblin notes and still scream it ain't fair/ catch on, catch up, catch this fast ass wipin with a mind curupt/ just for you i throw in some brutality/ wipe my ass with your face after it's lifted from your anatomy/ and yeah i felt your flow/ but after this i clean your brains up with mop and glo/ i'm not ready, but i'm through--i'm stoppin yo

<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: Katch on 2002-02-27 20:05 ]</font>


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If you read this: please declare a victor. It will only take 10 seconds of your time. ONE!

<font size=-1>[ This Message was edited by: Rip the Jacker on 2002-02-27 22:36 ]</font>


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"Rip a slit from your ass to the back of your scrotum/ Watch you give birth to your intestines" -->interesting imagery there..

Round 1 = Rip the Jacker(clever name)

<verses were bout even, but I liked that line..>


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Rd 1 - Rip the Jacker. Creative and vivid. Katch was steady w/ good flow, but no real highlights.

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Any more criticism? Settle the score! Vote.


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Ripp got in him

rd 1 RTJ


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