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This is Smakkyalls verse....


~Smakyall~

Step on up kid,
Yo,Ill be ya huckleberry,
smak, da battle cat
suprised, aint on da nuts already,
watch what ya say though,
could be fatal if ya cutz r petty,
dangle from a strangle hold
while my touch, keeps the tables steady,
my own dj,
keep da heat,complete, on replay,
so ya can study da technique
dat left ya pride split in 3 ways
you can hide, dip, and delay
even get some kids from out ya P.J.'s
serve fools
like this was school,
and punks get lunch the free way
up against my mike
ya like, a bunch of militant dikes
bobbin for rhymes in da river rhine,
dont make a bit of sense
but do what ya like,
I aint hatin,
you bout a buck Five
when ya words weigh in,
my verse is heavy on da scale
might tip da earth
say when!!!!????

eh..fuck it my new alias is Limou Bai...or howeva ya spell dat shit...look it up for me sombody...word....

da pen's da green destiny n shit


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It is "Li Mu Bai."

Who is Jade Fox, and Michelle Tsoh's character (I forget her title)?


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My Verse
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Traveling the stars-uncharted/til I SMAK-YALL dearly departed/
asking for tasks-and-bargains, while starting the farthest-arson/
it's the one and only -Sqwuad, Blazin'.../you'll probably-hate-this/
say-this shit is obviously-traitorous/sorry, its strongly-contagious/
some-say i'm wrongly-the-greatest/promptly stay bombing-your-fakeness/
stomping-a-satanist 'til his brains are chopped-into-waste-that's/
placed in disposable-containers/you supposedly-embrace-this/
openly I hope-emcees are phased with trophy's-and-praises/
my flow-preaches-ages.../makes-this an Elements piece-of-history/
increase-sufficiently/'til i'm deceased;/you cease-to-miss-me/
steez-is-shifty/i'ma humbly pummel this-emcee-'til-he-tumbles/
crumble-empty-wills-of-dumb-fools, some blood'll-then-leak-into-puddles/
stunned-all-when-I-speak-but-stumble cause i'm staying-egotistical/
make way,-I-seem-invincible/with led spray-that-freed-your-spiritual/
indeed-you're-pitiful when in comparison/my song-is-harassing/
embarrassing arrogant cats-that's-in the wrong-establishment/
imagine-them all in the parish-then i'm SMAKKIN'-men/
suggest you grab-a-pen/bash-them-again increasing action-by-ten/thas what happens-my-friend/...(when battlin vets)...!


Peace And One1


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Votes?


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big up.........hell, might of even got me wit that one....

gotta get back atcha after my test.....

-1


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xConvinceEmceeSx got this....just had a stronger verse in my eyes, Smak your verses are meant for audio...but still pretty dope

(((PEACE)))


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convince's word play was really nice..
convince rd numero uno ......


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yeah, TNT hit the shit right on the noggen...My shit is definitely meant for audio. or at least it would be good if yall could hear the sickness that im writing too.


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The first guy's first was borderline not good.. there was some decent stuff in it, but stuff like 'bob for rhymes in the river rhine..' C'mon, how could you write that and not know it's wack?

As for Convince.. dude has potential. I don't think you really know how to battle though. If you wrote a verse like that against me, I'd be like what the??? That shit really isn't a battle verse, it's just a verse. Also, I think you need to stop trying to focus on multisyllables so much... seems like you're focusing more on rhyming multiple words than on the actual content of your lyrics. If you really read some of your lines they don't even make much sense. Also, a lot of stuff that you seem to think come off as multi's don't even rhyme together. Just my honest opinion.


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Convince in his sleep.......
Why'd you even bother man???
He's weak as shit I still remember how in the tournament forum
I ate him barely tryin' after he picked a fight.............Do u remember too you lil' piece of shit?????
And I'd do it again.......


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convince round 1 just diggin his style more.peace&one1


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convince's verse was longer...but man you can't just throw anything in there cuz it rhymes...examine the tyming and placement of all nouns and verbs kid


convince Rd 1


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Aiight well i guess all the votes are in....maybe next time SMAK....!


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hold da fucc up....I aint so pompous that I dont know when a muffuka got me, and I agreed that Convince is holdin his nutz round here, but:

1. Wha da fuck is up with the thread changin everytime I look at it? why is convince re-writing my verse (just askin)

2. ILLSHITONYOU- man, ....how could I write that and not know its wack??? cuz its not wack...I mean, honestly, did you see that one comming??? it was rather unpredictable right? wont the best line, but damn....I try to make my shit uncanny, so sometimes it beez like dat. I hate the predictable shit.

3. Filthy, you out yo muffukin noggin son....stay off dat shit dawg. you nice wit ya lil shit, but you really aint fuccin wit this here....AND I AINT HALF DA BATTLE MC YOU CLAIM TO BE....ima poet, so this is really out my element...im just jivin wit'cha monkey boi!!!

man, fucc it dawg, Me and you been at it for a minute....I think its time we post some audio so we can really see who shukin n jivin and who tossin dey nutz....wuzzup potna??? I been hella lazy bout findin out how to do that shit, but I think its time.

hold my hat while I do da damn thang shawty...


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^^^^^^
Threat or promise, you have been O-fer so far on posting up audio


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WTF??....Re-Writing ur verse?? .... Your just bullshyttin right??.... I know you wouldn't go that low to claim I changed your verse...come on now....I gave u your respect for challenging....but dont fuck it up by claimin some off the wall shyt...Peace


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oh naw, I aint sayin you changed da verse, I was just wondering why your name is on the heading as posting my verse....just seemed odd...

and Jeb, Ima post dat shit forreal, cuz its time...im sending da album out for pressing within the next week or so....

so, ya kna.... FILTH!!!! WHERE YA AT YA MANGY MUTT!!!!!


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Just chillin' wit my man Bra' man from tha 5th flo'


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