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 Post subject: Trust Vs D-S I R E (VOTING CLOSED)
PostPosted: 07/30/07 06:21:18 AM 
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I went First Last Round You Can Start Us Off!

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I'll post my links when battle arises that I havn't already voted on.

You'll die before you flop your verse because I'm dropping first
Your aviation collisions won't make the chopper burst
I'm quenching and stopping thirst with the ridiculous flows
My dick will stick in your ho while your mothers' licking my toes
Snorting a brink of the blow and know that you'll never be dope
I'm here to hang you with these lines and never sever the rope
I'm clever with scopes, witness the marksmanship
I'll spark and rip, all you ever do is bark and dip
I'm a shark equipped to leave you like an amputee
With opponents victimized I'm now the champ to be
Your just a tramp to me, with a desire for semen
I'm murderous in every verse just like a fiery demon
Richard Pryor jokes are not even as comical as you
I've got more followers than all Islamic people do
I'm atomic so I'm through with this, I thought this was a war
But I've stopped you here before so let me mop you off the floor

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Bark and Dip Get A Whiff While You Flop Tell Your Stiff
My Flow Is Your Gift Don't Be a Indian Giver Seems like little Joey Has A Fever
I guess I'll Lower Down To Your Level Go To a Dumbass From a Rebel Sever Dope and Watch Tell You Choke
Matchin Lines Is Your Only Hope Son I don't Play Wit Scopes
I see More Lines Stoled From Tha Cold
Real Emcees Live By a Code That Elements Never known
Shows Pussies In tha Bloodest State 1 lick was your worst Mistake
Now You Rap Your Lips up Wit Duck-tape
You Failed To Create Seems Like Yourself You Ate Just Like Tha Rest You Took Tha Bait
Stay Fake For Your Sake Surround You Like Tha Great Lakes
Looks like Your Trust Fund Came Late Die It's Your Fate
Cracker Jack It's Your Faith That I break Like Mase Your Not Safe

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Trust all day new guy needs lotsa work...

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trust took this, with better structure, but d-sire, you had sum nice lines in der. if you work on that ...with the flow and structure,you could make your flow into sumthin hevvi.
vote - trust

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One of my two voting links.

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Trust takes this round...D you gotta start incorporating a bigger vocab and more multies..

Vote = Trust

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And I'd also like to add you need to get more personal with your disses D SIRE. You have decent flow but your rhymes are just all over the place sometimes and not focused on the matter at hand, and in battles it's destroying your opponent.

Trust didn't come with anything spectacular but it was better than D SIRES so therefore he gets the round.

Trust round 1

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trust handle this one with ease

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