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Rules:

verses due by Monday, April 9, 2007, ten days from now
all verses must be 16 lines long, just to make it fair
no feeding off of your opponent's verse
first to five votes advances to the next round
ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED.


and just check in to the battle, no need for voting links here..


Good luck.

Check..

Checkin yo. This shit is a lil one sided btw.

I literally picked all the matches by drawing names out of a hat so..

Who the fuck is this noob True Infamy?
Son, I'm knockin you out instantly
And I ain't even usin any of my infantry
Cuz you never make sense like when infants speak
I don't know why you even signed up, all your rhymes suck
Try to hold your own against my flow and your spine's crushed
Simply put, you're too weak, like wet paper
There's no comparin our abilities, it's easy to see Adept's greater
You haven't proven to be a vet slayer, not even close
And you'll never be able to match this demon's flow
I'll give your chest some extra breathin holes
After I make your heart explode
I guess you didn't know, at birth, your soul was sold
Now I'm taking control of what is mine
I've already taken over this kid's mind
I'm just waiting for him to post his shit, in time

Even if you were given a life to compile shit in ya mind/
When you finally dumped it'd never be hotter den mines
Even if dah sun was ya brain and hell was ya ass hole you'd never shit on me hotter den ice cold/
And you talkin bout my souls sold, nigga I snatched urs out ya throat for tryna tlk real bold/
And nigga ya styles played its real old/
You got dah shit beat outta you like a step son, a 12 yr old/
And do I gotta talk about the bitch move you pulled on Marblz dude/
Tried to post his girl's picture on dah net ta support ya verse nigga thats real rude/
And I can tell your not a minority cuz you've posted a rap that's "Supposed" to be gangsta, nigga ya thoughts of gangsta is totally misconstrued/
You must be kiddin me to actually try and act like you gotta attitude/
Until I smack dah dog shit outta ya mouth, now you lets see you talk shit wit out ya material/
And you already know I keep my shit spinnin like a McVerial/
And I bomb on ya ass cuz my barz aerial/
You could get a lifetime sentence and still not spit enuff bars to gimme my buriel/
So back the fuck up before I gotta put my 9 ta you, and times dat by nine ta blow enuff holes through ya wig ta make you look bolder den Michael Jordan dude/

Man I still gotta feelin I lost.. O well, I tried my best and that was STRAIGHT off my head no writin included. Adept, good verse dawg. I could feel the heat from it. I tried not to bite you too much but shit I needed somethin ta spit about.

good stuff man..you definitely stepped it up for this tourney..really long bars though..good luck..let the voting begin.

honestly at the beginning of True Infamy's verse i thought he was setting up to demolish Adept... then it got forced and a bit hard to follow.

Adept, you did your thing but i wish the punches were a little harder.

Infamy had crazy punches, but just like a "real" crazy punch i wasn't sure where it would land.

vote/ Adept.

you kept composure and delivered a structured solid enough (for Infamy) verse.

Infamy, try to get it under control and i think by the next tourney you might shock some cats

thanks for the vote hydro

1-0

Thank you Hydro. First time you ever gave me real compliment, I'm feelin the love NO HOMO. Hopefully we can continue this votin process.

Vote: True Infamy

I have ALOT of comments..But I will keep it short..

This battle surprised me because I have seen much better from Adept, and almost never have seen something better from True Infamy.

Adept told me once, Never Under estimate your opponent. I Hope Adept doesnt try to excuse himself by saying he wasnt trying, because that is Suicide.

Again, I Only Vote Objectivity like I never seen either one of these cats in my life. Otherwise I would be a punkass.


True Infamy. Everytime I read Lines I lookout for a Punchline. I always hope that meaning one line will finally connect with another line somewhere to complete a full Punch. Otherwise it is a blatantly missed opporotunity. Something I myself need to work on....Sun of Brooklyn usually finds a Punch in ever bar....

I finally found some in yours....

Even if you were given a life to compile shit in ya mind
When you finally dumped it'd never be hotter den mines

3 words in there that connect the whole schematic, further than just phonetically.
When TI says 'compiling shit' he could mean compiling stuff AND compiling actual excrement.
'Finally Dumped' could mean dropping a rhyme OR Taking a Bowel Movement.
'Never be hotter than mine' Sweeet. It could mean his Rhymes could never be better, OR, his shit could never be warmer, literally. That is pretty impressive

In textstyling.....it is becoming clear that Punch Lines are always the biggest earner. Like in Baseball, Pitching Beats Hitting.

Another good line from TI:
Even if dah sun was ya brain and hell was ya ass hole you'd never shit on me hotter den ice cold

TI's rhyme kind of fell apart at the end. Adepts at least stayed somewhat on par with itself throughout. More Consistent. But in the end all there was too choose from were Punches.

Vote: True Infamy

Wow, I was surprised after reading True's verse. Much better than I've seen him post in the LBC. Great shit, man.

Adept had some great punches but I expect nothing less. But I've seen better from you dude.

Vote: Adept

Strictly because the punches hit harder and had a constant flow throughout the entire verse.

I dont think Adept Had even one punch Line as I go through and read again.

2 - 1. MORE VOTES YALL MORE VOTES!

alright thanks for the votes and crit yall...but ac how can you say I don't even have one punch? seriously?!?

Wow, It did look like True was going to come and rip through adepts first in the beginning but the more I read the more dull the punches got.

Adept, Your's hold a solid punch throughout the whole verse, Weren't as strong as your usual punches but you still gave it to him. ( No Homo )

Vote : Adept

Yea man, I am being completely objective here. I'm just dissecting the rhyme. Take a look....

Nice rhymes schemes. I liked you matching Infamy, Instantly and Infantry and Infant speak. Sick. Mad nice Flow on that. Where is a Punchline? There isnt one.

I don't know why you even signed up, all your rhymes suck
Try to hold your own against my flow and your spine's crushed

When I first read it I thought maybe there WAS a punch there that I didnt get.
Holding your own against my flow and your spine is crushed....doesnt link up....and it doesnt link up with the previous sentence....



Ok I found a Punchline:
I guess you didn't know, at birth, your soul was sold
Now I'm taking control of what is mine

Honestly Adept i agree with ac it seemed like you just rhymed for the sake of it...This is My unbiased opinion Your verse belongs in the emcee forum it was on point but not a battle verse that is tourney worthy...


Vote True infamy.. Nuff said

3-2! I actually got some standing ground here.. Shit I thought I'd get a sweeped from the tourny but I ain't complainin. MORE VOTES! and good battle btw Adept. You spit mad sick in yo verse dawg.