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 Post subject: THROWBACK KID {versus} Toez =PoeTiC BattLe=(VOTING CLOSED)
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had a moment to set this up... i'll try and get to verse today i got a lotta shit to do. Holla back youngun.

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in a matter of seconds funky would be as dead as his hopes and dreams to be something in life
his internet lies, is an attempt 2 escape the harsh realities which thrives, as he cries at night
tha sounds of his screams are nothing compared to
tha screaming of a child gettin stripped of their knowledge like a guns at their hair do
as he looks at tha screen, air full of dispare and hopelessness
tears fill his eyes and forces him 2 lose focus
i can leave him left alone like a boi stood up for his prom
limbs ripped off of body, and he's left tryin 2 find himself like a pre-teen in his room all alone
he counts his losses like a fugitive counts tha number of days left til his parole
now the truth unfolds
he misses the feeling of winning, like a child misses his late grandmothers' cooking
or like a blind man misses the simple thangs in life, like looking
he's confined by his own web of lies, tha more he runs with it, tha more he strangles
it's grabbed him by his ankles, how he wouldnt have someone looking up to him, if he was their gaurdian angel
he looks in all angles for a glimmer of hope, a sighting of chance
but he's looked down on like the relationship between a white women and black man
its sad yet obvious that he wouldnt blow up if he had a bomb under his shirt
but maybe theres hope you'll win, jus pray the voters is on crack when they read ya verse...


sorry 4 tha choppy-ness...this tha 1st time i eva did this

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AfTer I blaze a 50 bAG OF SouR DieZel let's CommencE power letHal
you miSSEd the Target bro, ya Aim is Shitty ThiS man's ProfounD & EviL
RemiNiscenT of FreDDy in ya NigHtmares, ThRowBacks' quite SCareD
N ya TerRiTory I BrinG TerroR 2 ya Story, Out Da Closet BuT u StiLL Hide tHere
TreMblin from FlasHbacks of ya YoutH THRown Back to VisionZ of DeatH
and SicKeninG inCest wit ya Pops at age 6 there waS No Innocence LefT
To This Day 1 MenTion of It U ThRow UP on ya ThRoBack MitcheLL & NeSS
StricKen wit HaTred N ya HearT, WreNChed liKe tools 2 Fix Car Parts WiTh
U StuNt like U Hard buT Ur Harmless, N Pulp FicTion U Starred as the GimP
MiniTaTure SimPleton AttemPtin To ScripT with The HigHest Exaulted
DoN'T Try To be SmarT Kid, AdMire my Spit or Leave HigHly InSulted
TrUth's The PoeTical AniMal, everY1 KnoWs This FiGht's NoT FAiR!
You'LL Die A GRisLY DeatH iN the Prezence of LioNs, Tigers, and BeArs
FlexiN my MusCle like SoLo Van PeebleS InFlictin DaMage That's Illegal
A SaVAge Beast, I'll Use uR bLood to Paint on a caNvas with EaseLs
AuThentiC War DropS, I wRite BomBs as FlammaBle FinGertips DetoNate
& wON'T HeSiTate to Set a Date 4 ThroWback & JeSus at HeaVens GateS
Nice BrawL loser but U're LosiN I GuaRanT itZ A 4Gone ConClusioN
As U aWakeN tomorraH at Noon WisHin This Was All an IllUsioN.....

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throwback kid had a poetic verse, nice imagery in what you were saying.

funky had a better battle verse tho, but in the end it's who won the battle.

vote - funky

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Yo re reading my post I apologize bro... that was more of a battle verse. I'm so used to writing battle rhymes for battles that's just how it came out.. plus I was keystyling. If u want 2 we can do it again and try a topical theme next time. Lemme know if yu want to.

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throwback kid had a poetic verse, nice imagery in what you were saying.

funky had a better battle verse tho, but in the end it's who won the battle.

vote - funky


i aint bitchin or nothin but dog it was a poetic battle, so it should b casted on both, not jus half...howeva its your opinion...

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Yo re reading my post I apologize bro... that was more of a battle verse. I'm so used to writing battle rhymes for battles that's just how it came out.. plus I was keystyling. If u want 2 we can do it again and try a topical theme next time. Lemme know if yu want to.

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lol, yea i know what u mean, that shit was hard as afuck, i had 2 erase alot...but its whateva we can do a topical battle if u want after this is finished bein voted on

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I think yall should try it this way...

Not a topical just write ABOUT ANYTHING ( No Dissing ) And whoever has the most Imagery and who ever has the deeper poem takes it.

You understand? Like one writes about love, and the other writes about someone they lost

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Funky gets this I felt his verse was just all in all a better read with better imagery.


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0-2 u up

i know how 2 topical, we'll discuss tha details after this...if u still wanna go

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upp'n 4 votes

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can we get some votes to close this out??

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Battle-wise, this was won by Funky. Did you two agree on a poetical battle though?

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throwback is the only one who really followed the rules....so what are yall gonna do about this??....yall need to closed out this round and go another round with funky going first....

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don know what happened or whateva...but u still down?

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