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I haven't been around for a bit so it's time to let the heat fire
Load up the lyrical clip and rip through this bitch D-SIRE
But seriously, I ain't gonna bring all I got, why would I do that?
I can see through your illusion, and you still sound like a new jack
Plus, it's a true fact, you can't even count all the weapons in my arsenal
And the heat that you claim to spew flames is barely sparkable
It's remarkable, anyone that sees your verse can tell it's fake
And after your last couple attempts I really hope that you elevate
You fucking fag, I'll melt your face
Feed your eyes to my dog and sell your brain
Possibly to a satanic freak for some LSD
That I'll feed to your mom and make her get on her knees
You ain't fucking with me, or the demonic calligraphy my lead makes
Fucking pussy, you're such a rookie, you get knocked out by a head fake
I don't even have to throw a punch, but a single jab will have your jaw smashed
Your rhymes are all wack while Adept is known to kick the raw raps
So fall back before your body is traced on the stage with chalk lines
You'll have to suck another hundred dicks to be considered top five

U Came Back A Bit Rusty…But Still Kickin That Foul Odor…Seems Like Ur Bars Is ‘’Out Of Order’’.
U Better Call 911 2 Come Over...
Because My Jordan’s Is Stompin Ur Head Sore...Like A Jack Hammer Threw Tha Floor,
My Bars Raid Homes Like Swat…Ur Just ‘’Bait’’ Like Jamie Foxx…I’ll Drop Emcees Wit Door Knocks
This ‘’Won’’ So Slow…I Forgot That I’m Boxing…And Started Snoring Dodging
Homie…I’m So Elevated…I’m Touching The Sun, It's Like The Planets Is My Sperm...And The Milky Way Is My Cum..
I’ll Make Em’ Dance Like Thriller…When These A.k’s Hum…It’s More Then Gun-Talk Where I’m From
It’s Like Haiti...When People Was Fightin Over Crumbs…You Don’t Know Shit Bout The Slums…
I Can Tell…Because U Lack My Hunger…Dude…I Rap Like Thunder…And Storm Like Lighting..
Really I See Why U Ran…It Does Take 6 Months 2 Write 4 Me
U Took A Ball Bat Beating…4 Ur Top 5 Spot Unfortunately
Plus I’m 1 Down 2 U…So This Win Is Very Important 2 Me
So I’ve Up-Graded The Potency, Wit Superman Intensity…And Steel 4 Density...Wit A Touch Of Insanity ...
Man…Adept...U Still Grip The Microphone Like a Pansy...I Bet U Like 2 Clap That Ass Like Fancy??
I’ll Have U Sleeping Under Daisies…And Ur Name Chiseled On a Cement Slab..
Dude…I’ll Burn Away Flab…I Want 2 See Ribs Before I Stab…Now This Round Is On Ur Tab…Like Floyd Vs Zab…Or Cassius And His Gift Of Gab…They Will Compare My Deadly Jab…I Spit Like Twisters And Spun Em’ Like ‘’Taz’’
I've Blown Pasted Him Like Flash..

It Was A Long Wait..But Good Battle Fam!!..GOOD LUCK...

Votes!!

adept for better form, rhyme patterns

close w/ descent hits from D-Sire...but you need more direct hits...good conceptual lines tho

adept could've came harder ...good battle

yeah sorry about the wait D, good battle and good luck, let's get some more votes..

Word...Let Get Some Votes...

wow, still 1-0, uppin!!

Votes Plz!!!

another close battle for D-sire but he pulled it out. Adepts verse had good structure and flow but the punches seemed a bit forced and a little weak. dont get me wrong, solid drop, tho.

d-sire put it best in his first line "U Came Back A Bit Rusty…"

v/d-sire via sick flow with some creative/hard-hittin punches

Yo, I'm giving it to D-Sire, that hunger came out just a lil too much for Adept's delivery. I'm used to Adept rappin like that, but D-Sire rappin like that? Sounds like somebody is gettin a little underestimated.

good battle, D is definitely stepping his game up, the best ive seen him drop recently and your structure is starting to become easier to read and follow

i just feel Adept stepped it up a little bit with a solid verse, even though i know Adept could drop some hotter heat, but still it was a good battle, there were some good lines in ur verse that swayed my vote

maybe this calls for a rd 2?

vote - adept

2-2...Very Close...Votes Plz..

adebt was more direct, but D-sire had more weight in his lines, and his verse was more entertainment and flare, Adebt, I've seen you write verses like this alot, and theres nothing wrong with having a signature, but compared to d-sires verse here it's just not enough.

D-sire gets my vote.