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Hell, I'm expecting Christmas presents to arrive before deciding votes. With the time it
takes for rounds to be decided, how CAN a verse be premature. You wait on votes. I'mma drop. I'll be a granddad waitin on yall:

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Watch me vaporize him,
Verbally humiliate the verbal hulk, this verse happens to be the raw,
It's very hard serving these various herbs, honestly,
Victimizin' haters and reppin' this site Properly,
The Treasury of Rhyme, what's a measly stock drop to me?
His house is on a lot that is rightfully my property
You my apprentice, kid, pay some respect,
Got the mortgage? Well, I'm taking your check,
check……
This pussy know I bring the fire, brimstone,
…..Players hating me, I'm Jim Rome…….forever known to shine like a set of 26 rims, chrome,
Dig inside your dome n' drop a gemstone….I seen your girl filling up at pump 9 at the gas station
And she winked at me more than Sarah Palin, I'm just sayin'!
Unleash the beast on her
You a bench seat warmer…….
I hit her doggy style, ya better put a leash on her,
One in the chamber, when letting off this only spark,
Light your chest up like Tony Starks
Should I catch 'em leaving the club
when his knees is weak from the bub
Shit, it's the season of thugs,
See me standing over you holding a television, you fell asleep in the tub and I'm like
"good ev-e-ning, cuz",
O.J. filet em and I aint leaving the glove,
then flee the scene in a HUD and then double BACK to the club,


Ayo
You a ignoramus, waste of space,
Solid proof that god really DOES make mistakes
Ho style exposed, another closed chapter
Copout for emcees/excuse for a rapper
I show improvement like my name was Before And After,
Your momma only loves you cus she has ta…..
n' the price of fuel these days is way out of range so I'm
Wondering: Who the fuck gassed ya?

you want christmas presents? well imma wrap it up
smack you up, eat ya like the snack i had at lunch
all competition ended when i entered the room
victory cemented - stepped on yo flat lines with my shoe
cuz i just wanna kick it - but you demand a split lip
swing my fist quick, right hand lands big on this midget's wig...shiiit
you a whack addict, panic when no one peeps your pamphlet
sad as 9/11 graphics, ya get mad when mc's toe tag your tactics
i just gotta laugh kid, cuz wow your jokes was funny
cuz if u took shit serious, youd be dined signed not lookin bummy
i'm runnin laps round you while ya sidelined on my track
skyline chili gassed me - this fags got other heat in the back
bitch please dont make up stories that lack, speak with facts
my girl saw you at the gas station and yeah she just laughed
see this is where people clap cuz my drops is real
you cant stop talking nonsense, catch, you flopping to get a feel

Votes will come a lot quicker if people follow the rules, you need 2 vvoting links to proove you have voted on 2 battles before the votes can come into this battle..

Thats why it takes so long..

thats what i tried to tell him but he just couldnt understand. but i'm not posting voting links if he doesn't have any up there.

Good grief

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rules are rules. no need to debate it.
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Yes sir.

ANYway....I spar to spar. Keep my shit edgy. Votes are just a bi-product. It was fun.
(I'll try to adhere to said rules from now on)

Oh and I'll level with yall: I don't know how to activate the link so you can click on it. I tried that URL icon. Stupid, I guess. Oh well.

(Verb, don't agitated, kid!!! lmao) All jokes aside, I'm glad to be done with this one. It's hard for me to continuously bad mouth someone that I honestly got a healthy respect for. You got a good head on your shoulders. One.

I don't know if I peeped the other two rounds to be honest but this was a pretty good match. Verbal Hulk had some good multies and wordplay but I thought Catchphrase incorporated those with better punches.

Vote = Catchphrase

nope wasnt mad, catch. just wanted links posted so we'd actually get votes on the battle. otherwise, it'll just sit in the LBC until someone votes on it in 2017. no i feel you tho, we're both talented emcees so us clashing heads was necessary and at the same time some fun shit.

by the way, to post links just open a new window and go to the lyricist battle corner page. then find the battle you voted on and copy the url/link from the top of the page. then go back to the first window and paste the url/link into the battle thread youre droppin a verse in.

great 3rd round, verbal had a good verse, flow was on point but I gotta say Catchphrase definetly got this round locked down, you can tell he came harder on this go around, flow was good, and had plenty of good punches and wordplay

vote - Catchphrase

catch took this . . . overall better constructed, liked the word play and current events

two parts really stuck out to me in terms of rhyming and effectiveness

"The Treasury of Rhyme, what's a measly stock drop to me?
His house is on a lot that is rightfully my property"

and

"You a ignoramus, waste of space,
Solid proof that god really DOES make mistakes"

great internal rhyming and clever

Catch definitely has this round. Considering what VH previously dropped I would say he came half-assed. Catch was consistent, rhyme schemes were pretty tight and just more obvious effort put into the verse.

catch phrase had a dope drop but i tried to flow it nicely and it didn't come out right in certain points....it's dope on paper but not to me spittin'.....maybe on him.. but i couldn't imagine trully how it would sound... verb's , had alot of grace and flowed well

on the other hand catch's punches were harder though none sturck me to be personal ..... but as a verse nice..

verbal had a couple of not so hard personals .........i think this is a close one, but just cause of my nature to roll with the underdog i will vote= verbal