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a YO
check it son its been a long time
but some shit fucked wit my life like ima not hold mine
a YO
that nigga must been blind
butt-fuck the bull and shit wrote across ya face
i gotta get toasted to where i catch a rocket...ash taste
hit a key like ima crush that coward
and i know you drive that faded red exployer thee first edition by mr.bauer
i got stones to throw and cans to kick
comin by slow-mo gets me right near pissed
at least say something nigga, fuck honk and wave
and that jealousy reminds of a younger me buts its you
may god bless you cause ima smother ya soul wit notso snuggly tissue
and then ima timeout that ass
"tiger claw" rip you and dismiss you
that shit you here at night in your fuckin attic
that aint you just trippin 'cause you a fuckin addict
a YO
its me dog, remember them niggas paint the wall wit blood
cornered that ass ready to rob, jump, and pack your fudge
and then it was time to regulate 'cause YO-MAN was in the cut like motha fuckin nate

..who would of thought?.your even worse then before....

^

yo man you blow man.



..horribly..

^what was the poin of this post ?

i just was high and came across a computer so i just sat down right quick to spit some verbalz upon the elementz and now some punk fags feed my thread they ignorant comments just make me crush ya head
forget the hip hop shit cuz all i do is flow. garbage to you? fuckin dont read and post on my shit yo

i never said i was the illest but if a motha fucka think i suck and shit then why take the effort to throw some low blows--the way i look at it is the motha fuckaz that read peoples shit and then talk shit about it are just feelin bad about themselves so they gotta take shots at me to feel greater---if all you can do is talk shit about some shit than FUCK YOU
but if you actually have time to be stupid then at least tell me what i can do to fix my shit a little --i mean hell if you think its a gay rhyme they tell me why--hell better yet let me know what you woulda spit at me if i spit some shit like that at you--thats really all i try to do is have fun just making stuff up off the top of my head and thats that---if yall critics is so much more better than me then prove it---hell if yall motha fuckaz can off the head with some shit that actually is so much more better than that then do it and i will shut up otherwise im just tryin to kick it wit ya my brotha
ONE

I understand indeed, but i have 1 question... i know all that wasn't all directed to me, butt if you felt like kickin a verse why ain't you dropp a poem on the poet page, or this verse on the Emcee Forum instead of the tournament forum ?

nah cuz that shit wont directed at you at all it was directed towards toungue whom i have had beef with about him talking bullshit about other people stylez
and by the way i didnt even realize that i was in the tournament forum
i guess i was so excited about keystyling that i just got happy and didnt even think to post it anywhere else
my bad cuz
ONE

lol oh word..

i got you son how about you add me to your list of defeats?
or maybe i will put you at the top of mine
holla at me

..Was it?

haha funny thread

Wow, I didn't realize there was people here that were worse with comebacks than I was. and damn he made himself look like an idiot. Was I this bad?

we were all this bad